Reviews for At the edge of the ocean |
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![]() ![]() ![]() How the heck did I miss this one? (melts of the cute... and wonders what it is Iruka does with those kunai... and wonders whether the odd note in his voice was that he wants to go see the ocean... and off to tuck into the KakaIru C2 now that the site seems to be letting me log in again... _) |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, glad to read a fic about Iruka-sensei...hehe btw i added this to my C2 archive, protective embrace... thankies! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story - the last line of this chapter was brilliant. I'm definitely intrigued now _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now I'm definitely curious! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() E! This is cute! I love! :3 Continue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, have you considered doing two parters for these? It would definantly help those that are hanging (like myself who wants to know what happened with the barrier thing in the first chapter) _ update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. I'm very curious as to what Iruka is going to use those kunai for. Maybe you'll put that in one of the later stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it it was great. Hope u continue it soon PLEASE *Puppy dog eyes* _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, that was interesting. Now I want Kakashi to activate the barrier, just so I can see what it does. But it was very interesting, I liked it. I'm something of an Iruka-obsessive fangirl, so anything about Iruka totally gets my vote. Can't wait until it's continued. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I really love this ficcie! Epspecially with the characters. You got them to do what you wanted, but without making them completely wincingly OOC. If they WERE OOC, I didn't notice at all! The Iru/Naru brotherly parent-child relasionship wasn't over-the-top. Subtle, but noticeable. LOVED it! I hope that this isn't a one-shot. I'm looking forward to more of this if it isn't. Update soon! BEWARE THE MALLET! _~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I like! *glares* if you never update this again I'll hunt you down and put a swastika on your head and boil your brains out! XDD Please update this |
![]() ![]() ![]() (reads fic carefully) I am sensing... Kakairu undertones in this sucker! _ Or just friendship vibes, but still! Very cute, I like it a lot. I can't wait for more. I hope you write more! I really like the Iruka/Naruto Father/Son thing, I've always loved it. With Kakashi being weird father #2. lol Write more soon if you can! _~ I love your writing so far! Geuna~ |