|Reviews for Thoughts on Vivian|
| Mog Anarchy chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
A sweet poem, really emotive too.
Nice work on this, I'm not great with poetry myself.
- Mog Anarchy.
| The Princess Daisy chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
| Eladard Kikur chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
Is this an elegy? That wasn't a flame; that was the result of me having Senioritis of the brain! :O Lol, very nice elegy. I found that to be one of the hardest types of poetry to write because for some reason I kept thinking about how funny the subject's death was (in my case for the poetry notebook, Leila's D: ). I was going to ask who Vivian was, but I read the reviews and figured that I need to rent PM2 or something.
| SesshouMario chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
That was a very good poem! Vivian was one of my favorite characters in PM2, and I think you captured her character well here: making the simple innocence of her bullying sister a complex sadness. Again, I enjoyed it a lot. (I CAN'T WRITE POETRY FOR CRAP!)
| Clear Free-Flowing Liquid chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
It's a concept. 4 stars
| FireKai chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
It was a great poem. Congratulations.
| Chicken Miasma chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Aww, how sad! If only you spelled Vivian's name right, this would be in my favs