Reviews for Red and White
een nihc chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
sad and beautiful.i especially like the last line.
Pysche-Wing chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
*sniffles* ouch. To have that on your wedding day. :'( Great fic and intrugueing ideas. Very original, very well written.
Uzamaki-Girl chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
so one-shot.
Yeah this is deleted chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Aww...that sucks. :( But it's still a really good story.
Aya chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Too sad... too beautiful. Please, make sure to kill Itachi in your next fanfic hahaahaha
dragonxpanda chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
neon kun chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
OW! that was truly... unexpected. aw nice though. _
ElasticBobaTurtle chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
That was quite unexpected. A nice twist, though; adds a bit of intrigue. The last line is nice. ]
lexy4999 chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Gyah chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Good writing. Sutiably angsty and with that creepy ending... _ I liked it!

But maybe the characterization for Itachi is off just the littlest bit? He always seemed to me the kind of guy who'd happily complete missions to become stronger, not the type who would go out of his way to cause problems. But with Sasuke involved, maybe his mission was to enrage Sauske to the point of trying to kill him (actually, this seems like something he could do for entertainment...creepy!).

Anyway, happy writings and keep these types coming!
alliedoll chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
that was creepy. I hope Sasuke gets Itachi good.
Namiya chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
How sad. However pretty good. It's going to be just one-shot? I think it'll be better off that way... but that's just me.
LadytehMa chapter 1 . 5/24/2005

okay - that was *too* well done . . .
Tree chapter 1 . 5/24/2005

AHAHA...I like the angst and I dislike Sakura anyway.

No...I'm not a sick person...normally
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