Reviews for Attack of the Lava and Other Poems
punkey.doodle.funky.noodle chapter 6 . 2/21/2011
Again, great! The limericks are the best! I wrote one once:

A girl went to buy a nightgown

One that would make her mom frown.

But frown she did not,

And a sly smily she shot,

For it was her favorite color: brown.

I know. It sucks. I wrote it in sixth grade, okay? *sniffles*


obssessed wiv everything chapter 6 . 7/20/2009
'Han and Leia on the floor

doing things we should ignore'

hehe. Will never be able to watch any of their scenes without giggling now
Dgxuruend chapter 6 . 4/3/2009
lolz i love the hitchhikers guide to the galaxy reference
RiverGold chapter 5 . 9/29/2008
Not... terrible... well, terrible but funnily so.
Dragonfly257 chapter 6 . 7/18/2008
Ridiculously hilarious. You're awesome. :)
skywalker05 chapter 5 . 2/3/2008
lol! I especially like chapter one and two, and the first haiku (I picture either Vader or a fangirl as its narrator...). The others fell a bit flat for me personally, but your writing is clever.
Indy Organa chapter 6 . 5/24/2007
Oh my god- that is some seriously hilarious stuff! My laughter increased with each poem, until "Endor Endor oh Endor" I was laughing so hard I couldn't read it! Major kudos to you, you are a fantastic poet!
Shinken16 chapter 6 . 8/17/2006
I must say 'The Planets' was my favorite. I wish I could hear it with the music. You compose as well as write? That's so cool! By the way I never want to see a rabid Tauntaun. Ever.
Melenna chapter 6 . 6/21/2006
Brilliant and hilarious as always... I wonder if you would have to get permission from Lucas to actually record this and sell it though. idk, i guess thres a band out there that sings about harry potter. You should see what they do about copyrights and all that jazz.

Red Bess Rackham chapter 6 . 6/20/2006
That was I think the most random thing I've ever read, lol. Good job. :)

~Red Bess Rackham
nodaaaaaa chapter 2 . 6/17/2006
These are hilarious! Love them!
x Rajah x chapter 6 . 6/17/2006
Wow. That was quite entertaining. :)
Ember Nickel chapter 6 . 6/17/2006

I'd put the transposition a little later, but maybe I'm just an old fogey.

If you make it big (or not), I'm getting an mp3. And saying I saw it here first.
Queen of the Random Word chapter 4 . 5/13/2006
Lol, I liked this Phantom poet poem!
x Rajah x chapter 5 . 5/12/2006

Please forgive me for the late start, but I'm going to try to get away with reviewing all of your poems in one review.

Ah! I love you poetry! Write more! I put this on Story Alert!

The best one so far is the Yoda and the English one! ;)

My Spanish teacher encourages us to talk like Yoda because in Spanish, the word order is sometimes somewhat simliar. Or so he says.

He's an insane Star Wars fan, so that could be a factor.

He actually has us translate Star Wars script into Spanish for extra credit!

The Leia hairdo one made me smile. Cinnabuns!

Oh, and The Phantom Poet? Hilarious~!

Write more please! ;)
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