|Reviews for The End of Universal Man|
| Concolor44 chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Well THAT was a twist I didn't see coming!
| Kizunami chapter 2 . 8/26/2005
A few mechanical errors here and there, and the paragraphs are a little too short in my opinion, but an overall wonderful fic. Keep up the good work!
| Inspector Brown chapter 2 . 8/22/2005
Great job, however I must point out some bad English.
"...if one just runaways like you did."
"Runaway" is a noun, not a verb. It should read...
"...if one just runs away like you did."
This is why I'm called "Inspector." Peace out!
| Katarik chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
You consisently misspell "identity" as "identify". Other than that, excellent. Creepy, though, I mean really really creepy. I loved that the lady pushing to end supers was a super herself, and sister to such an obsessive one.
| Inspector Brown chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
I like the idea. And i can tell you plan to write more.
| Spindle Berry chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
There are some mechanical errors that make this awkward to read, but kudos for doing an expose on one the less prominent characters.
| the real Violet Parr chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
wow! this is really good! is it a oneshot, or will you be continuing? anyway, it's a cool idea!