adorable, fluff and angst and just amazingly written

YES

The humor turned into serious story and sweet! :D

Touching desu...! Heart-warming!

Nice story, Fai and Kuro-ki! ;)

Just notice and admit it already Kuro-rin! 3x XDD

Cute fic! X3 Your characterization of Fai is just... spot-on. (lost words)

the most adorable thing ever aaaaahhhh! this so should've happened in the manga! i would've loved to see it!

Ok, that was really sweet. Nice work :)

"And then Kuro-muu went to save the mage, then Kuro-pii gave his sword, then Kuro-pyon beat the dragon then Kuro-tan did this then Kuro-bun did that and Kuro-chin dίd this... Blablabla"-im amazed the children didn't get confused because of the amount of variable nicknames the ninja have...
Nice story, I laughed all the way, but it's also kinda touching how Fai got mad when Kuro-chun mentioned King Ashura, and that the mage kept on waiting for the ninja
The fairytale has a lot of meaning in it.. I love this so much

Awwww...

so many things that a fairytale story can tell you about someone :] that was deep Fai

I enjoyed it! I like how Fai sort of started to talk to Kurogane through the story - how they both did. Also, how Kurogane agreed to a happily every after and then kept hold of Fai's wrist through the market.

... I god a headache by the amount of -mi, -mamaa or in other words nicknames used in here... phew... but other than that... it's cute.

SUGOI! *0*

This was great, LOL-like, while at the same time being very serious with it's undertones of Fai's real feelings. In other words, I loved it. XD The story Fai made up was just perfect, too. _ Amazing job, I really enjoyed this fanfiction, and I can actually see it as something that could have happened in the manga. Wait, no-I WISH it had happened in the manga. 3 *Hands you a piece of cheesecake and super glomps you for writing an awesome story.* :D

This story is so beautiful I actually read it twice! It's everything a story about Kuro-pu and Fai should be. It really does seem like it's a chapter in the manga. And it's just plain eerie how well this alines with the manga. Extremely good and my newest favorite.

Oh my gosh, I love all the subtle and not-so-subtle conversation between Fai and Kurogane while telling the story. All those looks and symbolic wordings. I'm totally in love with the part where they're actually diverting from the story because Kurogane starts questioning the lonely magician as to why he didn't flee the empty castle by himself. Beautifully done and oh-so in-character. I caught myself listening with rapt attention to Fai's story when Kuro-ki reached Yuko's hut and was kind of grinning at myself as I forgot that it was a story inside another story. Fai is a good story-teller, just like you. I really, really love this one! x3