Wai~! How did I not find this fic earlier? Amazing! 10 out of 10 for IC-ness, and you get bonus points just because it's Fai and Kurogane. Their relationship is *so* very difficult to pin down with just the right balance of mutual annoyance and concern. Well done indeed!

And bringing Ashura into this was pure genius. ;) Kurogane has got to be going nuts trying to figure out what the deal was with Fai and Ashura. I know I am... o

It's sweet without being sappy. It's funny and somehow sad and it's very IC. _ Thanks for writing it!

This story is marvellous. Really! I love the way Fai told the story and the humourous bits injected into it. *cheers*

Aw! Klitch-san, nice to see you again after Hikago fanfiction! And I've gotta say, you've done it again- what a fantastic (and fantastically in-character) fic! Such a clever idea... I love, of course, that Fai uses the opportunity to subtly let Kurorin know how he feels about him (lol, making Kurogane uncomfortable is like a pasttime of his, ne?), but I'm REALLY pleased at Kurogane's reaction- his natural annoyance punctured here and there by the genuine curiosity about the mage that he obviously has. The moment he said "King Ashura. The evil king's name is Ashura" was just AWESOME- I really like the idea of Kurorin's almost inborn hostility toward the guy who's "hunting" Fai. Nyuu, if only a good author like you would write about such a showdown (hehe, a fight over the "princess in the tower," huh? ). And the thing about Fai being locked up all alone- you guessed right, it seems! (if the mysterious person in the latest chapter is, indeed, Fai) Nyuu, hope you write more KuroFai fics! Thank you for this one, too- such a pleasure (as always from you) to read!

I understand what you mean when you said your spell checker is overloaded with all the Kurogane's nicknames, haha.

I think this story is touching.. About Fai waiting for Kurogane to save him..

Aw! That was really good! I like how you write both of them.

AW that is so cute! Nice sweet story xP

Interesting...Isn't that what the princess in Shreck wanted as well?

heehee. so cute, so funny and very good _

Aw! How sweet! Yep...Kuro-myu is so dense!

Oh, oh...the Kuro-tako makes me think of Kuro-taco...KURO-TACO. LMAO.

This was really cute, nya~ GO MANJUU!

That was marvelous! It's so funny and cute, and yet at the same time very serious and angsty. It's just the perfect amount of Kuro/Fai, and very in-character. *squee*

YAAY! i loved it! just the right amount of KuroXfai, without getting into the mushy stuff. i can't wait to read more of your work! it was Hilarious, too. and totally in character! wow.

-'Este

This was so kawaii! I liked it!

I loved your story, it was cute and creative. Keep writing!

Oh! *_*

I almost cry! So cute! I loved it very much!