Pretty! I love it!

Aww... the story's end was soo cuute ! *heart-shaped eyes* I loved it, how Kurogane just randomly told a part of the story even though he just wanted to leave, and when he decided the king's name was Ashura just to see Fai's reaction

And Mokona was absolutely adorable XD

Que! So awesome! I'm gonna go read your other fics now!

cute! i love it! kuro-tan's awesome! and fai just has those secrets ne? wish i knew what they were...

What a great fic! Loved it _ it was so cute, with a hint of angst and a good portion of fluffy fun _

Please write more Kuro/Fai fics! Please? You're great!

~#keito#~

*clap* Very good way of telling their story. That was rather mean of Kuro to go and put Ashura in the middle of it all. Think you spelled haunting wrong too _. Anyway... I really liked the end of the story, and how you did it, with first Kuro making odd comments, then they broke off and told their side of the story, becoming... well, themselves in the story. Very creative! I loved the idea, awesomely told!

wow this was so heartfelt

So fucking perfect. So FUCKING perfect.

Me am love you.

This really is one of the prettiest things I've read in ages. I love the playful back-and-forth between Kuro and Fai while Fai is telling the story at first, but it's even better when they get engrossed in their parts and all the layers of meaning involved. The imagery of the mage being kept in the tower by no one at all is wonderfully subtle and lovely. Actually, the whole story is quite wonderfully subtle and lovely, really. There were lots of fantastic lines, but for some reason, "Sometimes you can’t save yourself. You can kill a thousand armies, run from a thousand evil kings...you can walk right out of the tower, Kuro-chi, and it won’t matter a bit. Sometimes you have to wait for someone, or the saving won’t be worth it at all" really sticks out. I also loved that it was "happily ever after, more or less." Excellent, excellent work.

I LOVE it! 'and they never got the white manjuu off the ninja's head.' Nice touch.

wow, this was a really great fic... You balanced a bit of humor and serious-ness. I really loved reading this, you kept true to the characters and provoked some deep thought about Fai.

Wow, interesting. I love all the hidden messages in Fai's story. Of course, I also love this pairing. Your writing is great, I couldn't help but grin all the way through it.

Hrm, interesting. There's something about the Kurogane/Fai thing that intrigues me. Could they be... romantically involved? Or just friends? Friends/enemies? Or some other bizarre relationship? LOL. It was a really sweet story, though, and Mokona was so cute. )

I love you. Lol. Which just goes to show how desperate I’ve been to find a good, almost could be out of the manga fic. Starving for them, really. Great job, everyone was in character, and the situation and interactions were believable. I could see everything perfectly. And I loved Monoka. :3 Once again, wonderful job. Please write more Tsubasa fics, as stories this good are few and far between.

Being somewhat new to the Tsubasa Chronicle scene and really only knowing what the eight anime episodes have shown me, I don't think I can fully appreciate this story. Some of the references, I'm sure, have passed over my head - which is unfortunate, as the story is *excellent*. The interactions between Fai, Kurogane, and Mokona are perfectly executed, and the multiple levels of the Fai's story and what's being communicated weave together beautifully. Thank you very much for writing this awesome fic! I really enjoyed it and the ending is fantastic. *adds to favorites list*