This is so sweet!

*couldn't stop giggling every time a Kuro-nickname came up* For some reason it just never gets old. XD; Anyways, this was wonderfully written, and I thought they were both very much in character and absolutely hilarious-Kurogane not a wolf my ass. X3v Ahh, and the winding up with the double-meaning creeping into the story was beautifully done as well, very smoothly woven in. And of course, the resolution is just adorable. _ Lovely! *adds to favorites*

~Fyredra~

Omigosh. That was just darling.

X3 That was cute and I'm squealing

Wow. This is so good! I loved it to pieces Great writing, good idea and oodles of adorable-ness. Loved it :)

ahh, that was sweet!... even thought not much really happened, but the message that was sent was sweet

Oh, this was cute. And not just cute, but you told their story in a unique way. It was interesting how they both ended up taking their separate parts at the end, and how Kurogane just did it so easily. I'm bad at reviewing so I doubt I'm getting my point across, but this was really an interesting story. Especially how by the end of it, everything else had disappeared and the only people who were really left were Kurogane and Fai, and how Kurogane still doesn't seem to quite get it.

And the very fact that Mokona wouldn't get off of Kuro-pipi's head was adorable. :) Excellent work! XD I enjoyed it muchly!