|Reviews for A River in Egypt|
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 5 . 7/18
A couple of neat twists but the end was never in doubt. Good story.
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 7/18
Clearly you got the reviews you wanted as you went on. Not sure what year this is, but you have a rather ooc Ron here and a quite forthright Hermione. I'm not sure why you didn't have Harry summon her hat and coat which would have been good too.
With a second thought, it has to be fourth year or later. Anyway, a good start.
| harmony is awesome chapter 5 . 8/15/2014
i really loved this story
| Hyaci chapter 5 . 7/26/2012
So cute and fluffeh!
| theoriginalmeathead chapter 5 . 2/23/2007
*shakes head in amazement* I dont think its possible for you to write a bad story...great story...
| whispere chapter 2 . 9/2/2006
Ah. So this is a story based on denial. Unusual.
| Rainbow Shiner chapter 5 . 8/20/2006
I love it, ;)
| HowAreYou chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
lol. great first chapter.
| Alanna Lee chapter 5 . 7/1/2006
*nods* Bout time too.
| Alanna Lee chapter 2 . 7/1/2006
I cant stop laughing, his reaction, priceless!
| Girl of 1000 Loves chapter 4 . 6/16/2006
YAY! That was good, I loved the bets part, it was funny.
| Girl of 1000 Loves chapter 3 . 6/16/2006
‘Okay, Mione, I’ve decided that I like you!’ ‘Oh, wow, Harry that’s great! You’re not in denial anymore!’ I especially loved that bit. I can't wait to read the next chapter so I will.
P.S. Can i have a muffin? :)
| Girl of 1000 Loves chapter 2 . 6/16/2006
Oh my god, that was hilarious. I was nearly red in the face. I loved the dialogue between them, and i can imagine them telling Harry that. Poor Harry, has no say in who he likes. Then again do any of us do?
| Girl of 1000 Loves chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
You know what i think me and harry are fairly daft. It took me a while to get that and when it hit me i was giggling like the blithering idiot that i am.
| thelastone1991 chapter 5 . 11/23/2005
A simple story line but a powerful one nonetheless