Reviews for Harry Potter and the Lost Heir
TLDriver66 chapter 16 . 3/18/2008
Wonderful story. Please keep the chapters coming.
Lydily chapter 7 . 3/12/2008
Hey... you're story is really great...but your french is, at the very best, horrible. I assume you're using a website to translate or something like that... but it's still abysmal... may I offer my help to correct theses sentences and all the others that are bound to come as i continue to read.

please take no offense in this, I really want nothing but to help

Summer
ITGirl chapter 8 . 3/11/2008
The story might be interesting, but the French dialogue is so badly written that it makes no sense to someone who really speaks French. And, by the way, Montreal in about 1050 km (650 miles) Nova Scotia, not exactly "nearby". Check your facts.
SG-Fan chapter 11 . 1/31/2006
Great chapter!
SG-Fan chapter 10 . 1/31/2006
Great chapter!
SG-Fan chapter 9 . 1/30/2006
Good chapter!
SG-Fan chapter 8 . 1/30/2006
Good chapter!
SG-Fan chapter 7 . 1/30/2006
Great chapter!
SG-Fan chapter 6 . 1/30/2006
Good chapter!
SG-Fan chapter 5 . 1/30/2006
Good chapter!
SG-Fan chapter 4 . 1/27/2006
Are you going to finish this?

It looks really good.
SG-Fan chapter 3 . 1/27/2006
GREAT chapter!
SG-Fan chapter 2 . 1/27/2006
Great story...

I really like it.
SG-Fan chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
Good start.
Meriem Clayton chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Lovely. Well written and very plausible as to the future of our boy - haven't read the recently actual book yet so this is a nice fix.