Reviews for Prince Charming
Experience Dreams chapter 2 . 8/2/2005
Still Wonderful! Still On The Edge of My Seat Waiting!

~Dreams
serpentilewitch chapter 2 . 8/2/2005
OMFG, I gotta get me a watch like that! Fluff and cuteness abound, yayness, but I think it could be a tad too fast, seeing as how they only just met...still, it was six hour ride, so I suppose that works. _ Can't wait till the next few chaps go up, you're great! Don't let be a weenie! .
serpentilewitch chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
OOh, I liked! One of the few among the few L/J pairings I've read where Lily doesn't immediately rip off James's head! A refreshing change, since that part always annoyed me. -_- Well, I gots more chappies to read!
dobbygrl chapter 2 . 8/2/2005
Such an adorable chapter! I absolutely love it! Update Super soon!
Dobbygrl chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Cute Chapter again! I think this is the third time I have read it. And it is still GREAT!
angel-girl-xxx chapter 2 . 8/1/2005
Good chapter! I really liked the interaction between Lily and Sophie - it showed their friendship really well, and it was good to see more of Sophie.

Just a quick point - Lily says, "Come on, Sophie, you’ve known me since grade school." Uh, in England, it's called Primary School or First school :)

Out of curiosity, are you a member of the Great Break?

I hope RL improves for you soon :)
Grimm Sister chapter 2 . 7/31/2005
A highly enjoyable read - even the second time.

You might want to fix Dumbledore's comment about his summer. You have a comma and a "-" right next to each other, and I'm fairly sure that that's not proper grammar. (I hate when people say bad grammar.)

I liked this story the first time. It's believable and fun and cute. I'm sorry to hear about all the drama that's been keeping you away, and not just because I've missed updates. I went through a lot this last year and countered by throwing myself into my fic. My reviewers (all four of them) liked it, but it certainly didn't help anything else in my life.

Oh well, you don't care.

The chapter was good and I enjoy your story.

Katy
Juicilyn chapter 2 . 7/31/2005
I really like this story. I know i've read the first chapter about 5 times now but I've never gotten around to the second and now I have and its good! What you said about the love/hate relationship is very true, not many people can write it and your story is like a breath of fresh air, its nice to get variety. Jameses watch was very clever, I really liked that. Anyways, I can't wait for more!
The Missing Cullen chapter 2 . 7/31/2005
Ohh bumpy...wait...that's boards talk...i want more story!hm i wonder what james did at the muggle club in lundon...
BigEnoughUmbrella chapter 2 . 7/31/2005
I love this story. It is so cute. I like James' watch.
FrEgOrGeLuVeR225 chapter 2 . 7/31/2005
a-ma-zing.

:)
ZenamesKat chapter 2 . 7/30/2005
Ah, here I confer once again with the lovely Erica.

And, I'm dropping the formalities.

So, I giggled, I laughed, I blushed, I loved it. As per normal. I L-O-V-E-D it. So there.

And, I'm glad to hear you and Sel worked things out. I dunno what fully happened, but... yeah. I read journals, I take hints, I talk to you and Sel... ::nods:: Just glad things are working out for yall.

Anywho. Did I mention I loved this chapter? Of course, I'm still giddily awaiting chapter four, naturally, 'cause... you know... It's like... a bloody awesome chapter.

But, back to chapter two. You asked for constructive criticism, and since I see absolutely nothing wrong with the content, I s'pose I must focus on my icky Grammar Nazi-ing ways, eh?

Ah, well. Please note I'm merely trying to help and whatnot. So, yeah. The only thing I noticed, really, that happened more than once was on a couple occasions you put "real" instead of "really," though once was when James was talking, so you could say it's intentional. I mean, no one talks with perfect grammar all the damn day (coming from the south, I know this to be true, ha). But, yeah. That's all I noticed, really. There was one other thing, but I swear to you that I forgot it... damn.

Ah well.

Yee-haw, lassos, and sexy Phantoms,

Kat
Elmindreda13 chapter 2 . 7/29/2005
Again, I loved it. I had a HUGE smile across my face the entire time I read it. I hope you plan on updating soon.
crazyblonde chapter 2 . 7/28/2005
i really like it so far. i love that it's not the usual love/hate story.. its original and definitely creative. cant wait for next chapter. Update soon!
Scarletteyes chapter 2 . 7/28/2005
cute stuff! i like...
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