Reviews for The Last Straw
Kayleigh chapter 5 . 6/30/2007
Can u please write some more fanfictions of Piper and Leo so i can read them thank u very much. Ps i am a fan of piper and leo

thank u very much.
Briddle chester chapter 5 . 4/11/2006
by the way Warlocks/demons shimmer not flame...
jaded image chapter 5 . 11/24/2005
Mm, I liked it :)

Piper and Leo shall forever live on, especially with writers like you supporting them.
alexywill22 chapter 5 . 6/27/2005
Alex: lmao! I was so hoping you would go crazy and finished it like that-

Prue: Hold it! I have a bone to pick with her! B CUP! HOW THERE YOU! LOOK AT THESE!-she fondles them-

Alex: Prue go to your cage!

Prue: It broke.

Alex: Go to Phoebe's. (She exits.) Bitch. Anyway, nice end. love Dan being evil and not only killing Jenny (Woo!) but dying himself! and the best part was Piper gloating over killing more elders and high fiving awesomeness!
halli-halliwell chapter 5 . 6/25/2005
that was so god

what a sweet ending
livingwyatt chapter 5 . 6/23/2005
very interesting! lol! cant wait to see ur new story!
halli-halliwell chapter 4 . 6/16/2005
i loved that chapter

really kinda made my day after a crappy science exam

i think you should do some big thing about leo and piper having to get together for her to get her memory back
alexywill22 chapter 4 . 6/16/2005
Prue: Wow. Good Job.

Alex: Um, Prue, we're suppose to be avoiding stuff like that...

Prue: (rolling eyes) Whatever...

Alex: Anyway, this was great. Though I wish Phoebe would've blown up as well, but that's just me. If you're going to give up on this story at least have Piper kill all the Elders, and Phoebe. Or you could just bring Dan or a demon in and make Piper think she's someone else, like when Chris tricked her into thinking she was from Valhala.

Prue: Oh Nice. I would've just inserted a naked Leo scene and go from there.

Alex: I'm so shock. Btww, Nicole, I'm being punish by FFnet so I won't be able to update for a while. Season 7 recap got erase-cries a bit-

Prue: Oh cry me a river..

Alex: You're a heartless Bitch, Prue.

Prue: Well duh!

Alex: Anyway, Update soon!
Prince Halliwell chapter 4 . 6/16/2005
this was good! it'd be a shame if you deleted it! in my opinion i don't really think this memory loss is a good storyline compared to the other one, sorry!

please update
alexywill22 chapter 3 . 6/8/2005
Nice twist... oh and Freebie can't handle a few visions? Suck it up bitch! At least your useful for once! I can't wait to see where you takes this!
alexywill22 chapter 2 . 6/8/2005
Wow! Go Piper! Nice explanation btw, very original. but did they make it? TELL ME! or I could just read the next chapter...
alexywill22 chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
aw dedicated to me? I feel warmness! Good on Piper! I hope she gets them all! On to the next one!
halli-halliwell chapter 3 . 6/3/2005
ohh wow are the demons gona come after the charmed ones with piper all crazy
Prince Halliwell chapter 3 . 6/3/2005
good chapter! i wonder if these deaths actually are connected to the Elders deaths?

update soon
livingwyatt chapter 2 . 5/27/2005
VERY GOOD! i just read the whole thing and you picked an interesting subject! update asap!
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