|Reviews for Temporal Sequence|
| Goodnite Moon chapter 26 . 3/9
This was truly a wonderful story and beautifully written. Truly a delight and I find myself coming back back to it again, and again.
I know that you stated no sequels but a oneshot of Sesshoumaru in Peru would definitely be something to read
| jbkb chapter 2 . 2/10
Regarding Inuyasha's character so far and in the anime, I can kind of understand his point of view. After all, she did make a promise to him and to have her not give 100% to that promise can irritate anyone add to it the fact they can only travel so far before they have to return so she can go to school (and I never understood why she would wear her school uniform to this). I was actually surprised with how lenient he was with her. I mean yeah he complained was kind of annoying to her but still, she was able to go home and do her school things even though he followed her there he didn't destroy anything. I always felt that Inuyasha was just a bag of hot air because he had to be in order to survive all those decades alone.
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 26 . 2/7
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 23 . 2/7
I know you said you struggled with this chapter, but it's one of my favorites.
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 21 . 2/6
okay, I'm guessing Ichimaru is either a son or Sesshomaru hinself!
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 20 . 2/6
Hahahahahaha oh Miroku
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 19 . 2/6
"Kagome made him want to believe in fate." Ugh. So sappy yet so good.
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 15 . 2/6
The color metaphors were a nice touch. Who knew Sesshomaru could be so poetic?
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 14 . 2/6
Love the analysis of the Sesshomaru Inuyasha relationship
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 13 . 2/6
Love this story so far! So addicting yet depressing yet fascinating to imagine Sesshomaru as a boy with a troubled childhood.
| Rviva chapter 22 . 12/27/2016
I have to sleeeeeeep but I can't stop reading!
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/15/2016
Great story! Loved the ending _
| Delicate Desires chapter 26 . 11/2/2016
I absolutely loved the story! :)
| glayce Alves da Silva chapter 26 . 7/27/2016
Oi eu sou uma leitora brasileira e gostei muito da sua história,
| viha chapter 26 . 3/26/2016
Really enjoyed reading it . The character portrayal was wonderful. The insight
into character's feelings and how their memories shaped them was beautiful
Will there be a sequel to it? I would
really love reading it