Reviews for The Futures of Sam and Me
Bellaswangirl71 chapter 4 . 4/16/2013
good story so far
Bellaswangirl71 chapter 6 . 12/11/2012
Make a seaqule man I love this story and Totally spies Sam is my girl
Leslieness chapter 11 . 9/9/2008
Hey~ nice~ anyways~ added you~
Brian chapter 7 . 1/31/2007
I've noticed some people don't seem to like the way you handle your stories.

You do have a great writing style.

You'll have to send me your email address, because I can't get it from the site cause I ain't logged in, and I'm only getting your name when I do get replies from you.

I've decided on a user name if it's not taken for when I join, Senor Cardgage.
Brian chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
Good as usual Matt.

What's your email address by the way?
SMSgt Misao chapter 2 . 1/30/2007
Apparently, the majority of you haven't learned CRAP about how to be respectful!
Hikari chapter 6 . 1/3/2007
I thought Chad was only a few days old. Why is he pointing and speaking gibberish?

You describe the clothes too much. I mean, in real life you worship dirt bikes and video games..and those are the clothes you always wear in this fic.
Hikari chapter 3 . 1/3/2007
The huge paragraph at the end of the chapter was way too hard for me to read. And you all you talked about this whole chapter was that Sam was naked.

You're obsesed with her, no?
Hikari chapter 2 . 1/3/2007
I counted about twenty words words in this chapter that were along the lines of 'honey', 'sweetheart', and 'darling'.

The sex part was...unappropriate. In Totally Spies, Sam is supposed to be smart and cunning; however, she screamed at a puddle of ketchup on the kitchen floor.

And isn't Mathew supposed to have a job by now? They've already been married for five years. It's really unlikely he wins a bunch of money.

I am not flaming you. I am merely giving you constructive criticsm.
Clara chapter 1 . 12/12/2006
Goodness. It'll be much better if you cut out all the words, "sweet" and "darling" and all that blah. It kinda ruins the entire story. And this shoulf be rated M, not T.
S.P.D. Gold Ranger chapter 1 . 10/19/2006

I was about to start shouting numerous expletives at whoever was criticizing Mat's story, but it looks like you guys already beat me to it.

Nice job so far, Mat! Thing is, my dad seems to be taking his sweet time on fixing my computer. (FYI, I'm typing this review on my dad's computer.) I'll let you know when I'm back, which hopefully will be soon.

Over and out,

S.P.D. Gold Ranger
Analiria chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
You need help. Badly. I know i shoudn't say anything to a person if all i would say is bad, which is very rude, but you really need help. You want me to call an ambulance straight to the for you or would you rather want me to leave you alone if you stop this fic.? I'm very sorry for being rude... but you're giving TS a bad name...
xXxDarkRavenxXx chapter 3 . 8/8/2006
In your story there are always words such as sweetie and such and it kinda get repetative just some advice. I also don't understand how someone coud be pregnant without... _
Mr. Honeysuckle chapter 11 . 7/30/2006
Hey Mat. There's nothing really too wrong with this story. I think I may have done the birth scene a little differently, but it wasn't bad the way it was. Oh, and I need to correct part of a review I posted last night to Mat's other story. When I said a reviewer needs to attack the content of a story, I meant their attack should be substantive! My parents named me as they lay in bed. Oh, and just so you know, those of you that swore in your reviews, that can be construed as abuse. It seems, further, that some people, intelligent as they purport themselves, have missed the inextricable and direct corollary between fanfiction and fantasy. Fanfics come from the imagination, yu'know, where fantasies are born! Life is hard, we all know that. That's what fiction is for, or at least it should be. Maybe the story isn't realistic, but I applaud Mat for doing what makes him happy and enthusiastic. Are you all angry at him for that? You have, as I said, talent as a storyteller, Mat. Don't give that up! I'm currently employed and there are days when I'd love to have the kind o flife Mat has in his stories. Yes, this is self-insertion, but at least Mat isn't invective to abusive to other people, real or fictional. I've read, and even misted, stories with such problems.
cold hearted chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
... not funny
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