|Reviews for Tag|
| 8579 chapter 17 . 5/22/2015
Awesome work! You wrote kisuke well
Any chance you could write another Bya/Yoru story?
| 8579 chapter 15 . 5/21/2015
This was the best scene with them in it! Both are really lovey dovey couple!
| 8579 chapter 10 . 5/21/2015
I like the conversation between Yoruichi and Ichigo on the roof top. It's heartwarming.
| 8579 chapter 7 . 5/21/2015
OTP and loving it!
| 8579 chapter 5 . 5/21/2015
You made my heart skip a beat from the scene of Yoruichi and Byakuya under the umbrella!
O.K now, to the next chapter
| 8579 chapter 3 . 5/21/2015
| 8579 chapter 9 . 11/14/2013
That reminds me of a quote :"There is a place you can touch a woman that will drive her crazy. Her heart."
| Xiao Bi chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
One of the first fanfictions I've ever read and still one of my favorite.
| Raijin chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
The only typo I've noticed so far is how you spelled Flash Step
it is spell Shunpo not Shyunpo. Your story is very good so
| Perfect Beauty chapter 18 . 2/24/2010
i really liked your story. Excellent job
| venuslegacy9 chapter 19 . 4/22/2009
I really liked how you explored the relationships of the couples althpugh my particular favourite was byakuya and yoruichi, you are very talented. i did find it difficult to follow certain parts, but it did not hamper my overall enjoyment of the story, i just wish there was more. I can't get enough of the way you write byakuya and yoruichi together, i also liked your portrayal of the relationship between urahara and yoruichi.
| auditoryeden chapter 19 . 10/12/2008
You seem to be a writer of astonishing talent...I only hope that that is true and you don't have to work for this quality. YOur story is a bit choppy, and you'd do well to make your writing less confusing. Also, research your facts.
Otherwise, quite good. I did notice some severe typos though. You should find a beta editor.
| auditoryeden chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
no, no, no!
-kun: friendly. Usu. between males or slightly inimate aquantance
-san: Mr. or Mrs. more formal than -kun and -chan. a good bet when you aren't sure of how to adress someone, althoug the first time you use it, you probably should ask if it's OK
-sama: lord or lady. nobility, royalty
-dono: someone for whom you have great respect. not necescarily more respectful or formal than -sama.
-chan: usu. used between close friends. for males abouve age ten it's generally demeaning to be called this, along with -bo. commonly used on children.
| IVIaedhros chapter 17 . 11/12/2007
Great read...ByakuyaxYourichi is a very interesting pair and I hope to see more of them. Good job with the cutting between past/present as well.
| Celira chapter 19 . 10/28/2007
Yumichika vs. Ishida: Seamstressing Showdown is the best thing since ever.
And Byakuya/Kuukaku dynamics are ridiculously awesome. I love you, jie jie. *heart*