|Reviews for Tag|
| NeverGoodbyeRoxas chapter 19 . 1/17
I remember reading this back in 2006 or 2007. It was my first Yoruichi/Byakuya fic that i'd read...and it is still the defining piece I think of when returning to this ship and fandom. It was absolutely beautiful in it's somber tone, in its method of weaving the imaginary past into the present that was so believable that I wanted it to be real...all of this when canon had not given us much on the histories of these characters. I adore your characterzations and how you allowed them to interact without sacrificing their strengths or their flaws. I especially loved your Yoruichi and the way we could see her gradually imparting her philosophies to Byakuya...and people whom she had not even considered like Soi Fon. It was a romance, yes, but it was also a peek past the shrouds that had hidden what we as Bleach readers had not known at the time-why did she leave and how did it impact her colleagues and herself? I still return to this story even years later because for me, it stands the tests of time and only becomes sweeter with its themes of nostalgia, regret, and absolution.
| 8579 chapter 17 . 5/22/2015
Awesome work! You wrote kisuke well
Any chance you could write another Bya/Yoru story?
| 8579 chapter 15 . 5/21/2015
This was the best scene with them in it! Both are really lovey dovey couple!
| 8579 chapter 10 . 5/21/2015
I like the conversation between Yoruichi and Ichigo on the roof top. It's heartwarming.
| 8579 chapter 7 . 5/21/2015
OTP and loving it!
| 8579 chapter 5 . 5/21/2015
You made my heart skip a beat from the scene of Yoruichi and Byakuya under the umbrella!
O.K now, to the next chapter
| 8579 chapter 3 . 5/21/2015
| 8579 chapter 9 . 11/14/2013
That reminds me of a quote :"There is a place you can touch a woman that will drive her crazy. Her heart."
| Xiao Bi chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
One of the first fanfictions I've ever read and still one of my favorite.
| Raijin chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
The only typo I've noticed so far is how you spelled Flash Step
it is spell Shunpo not Shyunpo. Your story is very good so
| Perfect Beauty chapter 18 . 2/24/2010
i really liked your story. Excellent job
| venuslegacy9 chapter 19 . 4/22/2009
I really liked how you explored the relationships of the couples althpugh my particular favourite was byakuya and yoruichi, you are very talented. i did find it difficult to follow certain parts, but it did not hamper my overall enjoyment of the story, i just wish there was more. I can't get enough of the way you write byakuya and yoruichi together, i also liked your portrayal of the relationship between urahara and yoruichi.
| auditoryeden chapter 19 . 10/12/2008
You seem to be a writer of astonishing talent...I only hope that that is true and you don't have to work for this quality. YOur story is a bit choppy, and you'd do well to make your writing less confusing. Also, research your facts.
Otherwise, quite good. I did notice some severe typos though. You should find a beta editor.
| auditoryeden chapter 9 . 10/12/2008
no, no, no!
-kun: friendly. Usu. between males or slightly inimate aquantance
-san: Mr. or Mrs. more formal than -kun and -chan. a good bet when you aren't sure of how to adress someone, althoug the first time you use it, you probably should ask if it's OK
-sama: lord or lady. nobility, royalty
-dono: someone for whom you have great respect. not necescarily more respectful or formal than -sama.
-chan: usu. used between close friends. for males abouve age ten it's generally demeaning to be called this, along with -bo. commonly used on children.
| IVIaedhros chapter 17 . 11/12/2007
Great read...ByakuyaxYourichi is a very interesting pair and I hope to see more of them. Good job with the cutting between past/present as well.