|Reviews for Pretenses|
| Ann chapter 15 . 4/22/2009
I hope that you haven't forgotten, or given up on this fic. Would like to know what happens next. Please update soon.
| nattylovesu chapter 15 . 4/20/2009
in my country NCIS Twilight showed just last week...yea...we are a bit backward for this series
This has made this very interesting reading for m, particularly as I loved your writing style from Dark angel days...Thanks and pls doont abandon this fic...I find that you write Gibbs and Tony very well
| Trickster's Queen of War chapter 15 . 9/17/2005
lOved it please update soon
| chiroho chapter 15 . 9/6/2005
Love the ending, with the suggestion that maybe Ari had been intending to kill someone else. Also love the way the characters are handling this.
| Charis chapter 15 . 8/29/2005
I love your story and hope you will continue it! I also just want to say thank you for writing a conclusion that isn't a dream sequence of some kind... just one of my pet peves when shows do something totally spectacular that keep viewers going "that'd never happen!" then make the whole thing a dream sequence. I thoroughly enjoy reading and hope you'll continue!
| ryn chapter 15 . 8/28/2005
Very interesting twist to the story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| ryn chapter 11 . 8/28/2005
I really really like this story. The characters are behaving like themselves, your writing flows, situations seem reasonable. I only hope when NCIS resumed its third season that Kate's death will be treated in the manner in which it deserves. The repercussions on the team should be enormous and your story addresses them.
| shirik chapter 15 . 8/25/2005
tnx for updating- i realy like your story!
| jtbwriter chapter 15 . 8/25/2005
Okay-this is evil! LOL!
Gibbs is very IC-I expect to see him this angry-
and his words are so right on!
Tony and McGee are good-and Tony now understands
what's at stake here!
Thanks for continuing this-please update soon!
| chiroho chapter 14 . 8/10/2005
Actually I hadn't forgotten the prologue, but I'd spaced on the fact that everything that's happened since the prologue actually happens before that scene. D'oh!
And nice getting Tony back in time for Gibbs to be upset. Look forward very much to the tie-in!
| jtbwriter chapter 14 . 8/9/2005
I remember, what is going on?
I really can't stand the "protect Ari" mode-yesh!
Poor Tony-he's really going to go off now! Good
story-thanks for a hot update!
| chiroho chapter 13 . 8/3/2005
Interesting having Tony go to Israel. Definitely reading to see where this goes - even though Kate is likely dead. Though I am interested in who Tony saw in Israel.
| rozzy07 chapter 13 . 8/3/2005
Wow this story is really getting intense now. Tony is really on the hunt and I love the way he is not going to let the politics of the various agencies stop him. Go, Tony, go! Great writing, you could feel yourself being transported into the world of Foreign agencies, Intelligence work and the general untruths their world revolves on. Go give me more son. Plz
| jtbwriter chapter 13 . 8/2/2005
Interesting-Tony going off to Israel-and seeing a
double of Kate! Then finding the party line about
Ari still being touted!
Good update-the twist with your AN makes it even
more "what now!"
| A chapter 12 . 8/2/2005
I'm really enjoying this story! It's well thought out, Kate's not dead, and Tony's turning into someone even more awesome than he is on the show. I love how you keep the characters true to both your story and the show's version. Bravo! Waiting (trying to, ha ha) patiently to read more...