|Reviews for Alone Together for Christmas|
| snowflake chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
is this amazing or what?
| JC Rose chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
wow im surprised this story only has 4 reviews! i loved it!
| Hawaiian-Plumeria chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
Pure fluff :)
| xX.mediator chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
Aw it was sweet .
| shooting star180 chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
keep it up!
| Ebony Tear chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
One thought - it got pretty annoying to have them constantly address the other person with their names. Regular conversation isn't like that.
Just think of talking to one of your friends and going "right Mark? I don't think so Mark, etc." Name is usually only added for emphasis. In this situation, it makes the story pretty stilted and unrealistic.