Well done, I love to see what trouble a preteen Cologne will get into. LOL, now she shall know the pain of the infatuated Kuno.

Innortal

Looking fun so far, and with a youthful Cologne running around, I feel for the men of Nerima, they'd better watch out, imo.

great work.

the chapters are a good length and you get through the story at a fair pace; though i would slow it down more in some parts so the reader gets a better feeling of the characters, but it's fine either way.

keep going!

by the way, wild arms is the game you reverence here. also during the second battle with kagato, the ship's new trance formation is very much like the outlaw star. and the 'arc impulse is from... ... ...well in truth, i forgot, but i do know that this is yet another reference to a game... i think either wild arms or grandia... maybe some other kinda rpg... oh well.

thanks for the fun and the headache (arc).

till next...

Awright! Now I'm goin to check out Ranma the Mighty. Nice twist with the time warp there. (It's just a jump to the left and a step the right...)

I likes it! I likes it! Despite my ignorance of Birdy the Mighty, uh, well everything but Ranma, even your original story, this story is very enjoyable. It's a fun read so far. Keep it up.

I like your style of writing. I just have a minor quibble.

Since Kiyone hasn't appeared, I assume this is OVA. In the OVA, Mihoshi's entire family is a part of the Galaxy Police, even if they're the cleaning crew which is the case with Mihoshi's mother. She would not have had to run away to join the GP.

On another note, Washu married Mikamo, having Mikamu.

Mikamu married Miyuki, having Minami and his sister Mikami.

Minami married an unknown person, having Mitoto.

Mitoto is Mihoshi and her brother's mother, thus making Washu Mihoshi's great-great grandmother.

GREAT NEW CHAPTER.

Looking forward to how Kikukoi takes on the rest of the NWC, and how Ranma reacts when he finds out more about her.

So Kikuko is in the recent past, this ought to be good. I just hope Mihoshi doesn't screw up the time space continuum to badly.

LOL, this should be fun.

Innortal

Good story so far! It is AWESOME! I so love it. PLease have more out ASAP! Later!

Good chapter, and we get to see Kagato as the main villan? Now on Earth as well, does that mean we'll see the rest of the NWC as well, and what'll that mean for everybody?

Okay, maybe it's nitpicking, but Kei's hair is predominantly orange, with a blonde tuft, not the other way around. I should know, because I have the whole Dirty Pair Flash series.

As to the issue about how compitant Kei and Yuri are...

Well, it really depends on which version is depicted, and when in the series you are focusing on.

Dirty Pair Flash: Sure, they start out as a lackluster pair of agents who can't seem to get along, succeeding only with the Devil's most of the time, but this series is supposed to represent them right at the unglorified begining of their career. And even then, they were spectacularly compitant combatants, even if they had all the investigative abilities of your average Idaho potato.

As DP Flash continues, the pair work through their differences, gradually becoming less incompitant in non-combat roles, then eventually showing signs of extrordinary potential by the end of the series - when, btw, their Devil's luck starts to work against them, causing more catastrophies than they used to when their luck was keeping them alive despite their incompitance. :)

Dirty Pair (Original Anime): This version seems to vary vor the most part - at times, they are professional, compitant, and effective, but plagued by the Devil's luck, and at other times, they squable like old roommates and their missions seems to get done despite them. Either way, mass destruction ensues... ;)

Dirty Pair (Adam Warren version): I don't remember whether I read it in the books or in one of Mr Warren's author's notes or interviews, but this pair is actually supposed to be very compitant. They always get the job done - it's just that they are only ever sent on missions where things are expected to rapidly deteriorate into mass destruction anyway, whether they are involved or not (with one or two exceptions, but they weren't technically even on missions at the time... -;; ). For the most part, the disasters that happen arround them would have happened anyway, and their presence has actually made most of these disasters smaller events than they would have otherwise been. Although causing a cascading chain of supernovae during a convention honoring them is not going to be something that Yuri lives down any time soon...

As to Kikuko the Mighty: I've only read the first chapter so far, and while i liked it, the pace is entirely too fast, like you're skipping ahead to the "good parts" while ignoring some of the "boring" foundation work that helps to establish the characters. For one thing, you completely skipped over how Kikuko and Mihoshi became such fast friends - somehing that could have easily filled the first chapter even if it was as simple as "they met and something just meshed between them".

Well done.

Keep up the good work.

Innortal

I see where this is going. Mihoshi's not gonna be alone when she meets Tenchi and the gang. From here's where the OAV's gonna be, right? Have you seen my work?