|Reviews for With all my heart|
| Eyanei chapter 2 . 6/4
Oooooh this is gettin g good! :D
| Tatycardia chapter 3 . 1/25/2007
This is beautiful...
And it sounds so real!
Really! This could be a real book or a movie...
I love it, I'm addicted to the storie, please continiou...
PLEASE! I'm begging ya :)
| Soawen chapter 3 . 2/13/2006
What a gem to find amongst the omgliekzohawt-fics that appears to have taken over in the VH-section!
Your language flows and catches the reader at once, and I love how you weave information-pieces (such as descriptions) with dialogue. It makes it an easy and interesting read. If anything, I think you jump a bit too much between PoVs, but I'm not one to point fingers there ;)
Your Dracula is very IC IMO. His shifting moods, the bored search for entertainment/a challenge, the sudden oh dear, that was a bit more serious, now would could I do to stir things even more up-ness. I particularly adore why he waited to rescue Verona ("Especially since he had liked idea of the scenery and the big audience. It gave him time to send a few more employees to his estate") - the mix between oh, admiring, terrified crowd! and practicality is spot-on.
Verona is a pleasant read as well. You have given her a personality well within what I think could be found at that time and age (nothing irks me more than grrlpower!feminists posing as for instance Victorian ladies). My only objection is that I think she lacks a clear "voice", but that may be due to the PoV changes.
All in all I find it quite a tragedy (sniff!) that you have gotten stuck/abandoned/tired of/found funnier things than this little fic ;)
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| Kara chapter 3 . 8/27/2005
I LOVE IT! Beautifully written! Update soon please! I want to know how he changes her into a vampire.
| KaindeAmedha419 chapter 3 . 6/28/2005
I don't understand why no one has reviewed for your stories. They are wonderful! I have loved Dracula ever since I saw Van Helsing, but it can only be Richard Roxburgh, everybody else I can't stand as Vlad. Anyway, you have Vlad's personality down very well, I've heard it's not easy to pin down. He's so unpredictable. Keep up the beautiful work, Dark Matters needs to be updated so I can read more of your wonderful work. With all my heart would be good to update too, I'm interested in what will happen. Why the hell does no one review? Lazy bums. I'll knock em all upside the head, and order them to review! Your stories deserve it much more than some of the other ones! Wow, this has gotten long...
| Fortune Zyne chapter 3 . 6/5/2005
| KaindeAmedha419 chapter 3 . 5/27/2005
I'm amazed by your writing ability. It is so wonderful to have such a talented writer writing stuff on Van Helsing. It is rather hard to find. Keep up the great work, I'm hoping to continue with your Van Helsing stories.
Dracula...M...*licks lips* He's such a hottie. _