Reviews for Redheads and Succubi
GeorgeTobor chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
The table thing, if I had been in Ranma's shoes I would have turned on Akane, and beat her until she learned better. Akane's anger is not funny and she needs to be hurt, before she kills someone.
Spokavriel chapter 8 . 12/4/2010
Yeah... So how many drugs were you taking when you wrote that last part? I know it couldn't have been limited to legal ones so if you want to plea the 5th amendment the way this ended up would make it quite understandable.

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Spokavriel chapter 7 . 12/4/2010
So you did toss DBZ into this blender. Its easy to guess why the next chapter is the last one to be published. Everything outside of that aspect can still be given some room for believability with eachother so long as you don't try to enforce too much of anyone's particular cannon. But DBZ you get beyond the power levels before the trim to Namek and its totally fucked for making it work with any more than just 1 at a time of any of the other continuities you have mixed in here.

If you ever get around to a rewrite of this dump the DBZ BS and really unless it is needed for later cut down on just how many crossovers you wander into while Ryouga is lost. He can get lost in multiple areas of other stories without having as big a mess on your plate.
Spokavriel chapter 6 . 12/4/2010
You do know that the tail makes absolutely no sense. And if you are going to toss DBZ into this mess then its damn good you didn't continue this further than you had. Because that is one thing that would change all the aspects in this you already have that are fun into pure crap.
Spokavriel chapter 4 . 12/4/2010
Warg are from Lord of the Rings in case no one told you yet. And Swimming to America? Really... Unless you go by way of the Alaska peninsula and that archipelago you are having Ranma swim the widest expanse of water on the planet. Excessive much?

Daniel Thomas Stack

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Spokavriel chapter 3 . 12/4/2010
I'm almost certainly way too late on that contest. But why in the world would you want Raven bound by a Ring to Ranma the son and daughter of Saotome in one and child of a panda? Does Ranma just scare off her dad or is this claiming Ranma will get uber enough to destroy him? And being bound by the ring can it just be engaged or does it have to be married?

Oh well. The answer is probably already written.

Daniel Thomas Stack

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Spokavriel chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I know its been a long time. But you still have some typos and you follow the original manga plot way way way way way way way way way way way way way way too closely.
Abe Sanders chapter 8 . 8/20/2010
Hilarious! You are pulling EVERY cliche/crossover out of the closet and giving it a whack!
Orchamus chapter 8 . 4/30/2010
BLARG! SO...MANY...CROSSOVERS!
firemaster101 chapter 8 . 2/14/2010
finally nodoka is here
firemaster101 chapter 6 . 2/14/2010
hahahahahah hes got a tail
firemaster101 chapter 5 . 2/14/2010
that gots to stink for them
firemaster101 chapter 4 . 2/13/2010
omg u got stargate on this to ur aswm
firemaster101 chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
a dire wolf why would ember want one
firemaster101 chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
nice
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