|Reviews for Expecting Love|
| Ky111 chapter 14 . 4/18
Also Tony has really good observation skills (even by investigator standards) and is able to learn things about people just by observing them or throwing very obscure questions at them.
| Ky111 chapter 15 . 4/18
Hi I'm the guest reviewer who just reviewed this fantastic story (I didn't realise that I was logged out).
Anyway awesome story.
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/18
Awesome story, always enjoy a healthy dose of Tate (really is a shame that she left the show, left so many what ifs and if only's). I really like the name for their little boy as well nice mesh of both their names. I'd really like to see either a sequel or a new Tate story especially now we have even more background on both of these great characters.
I unfortunately don't have the ability to write a story myself but I've been thinking for a while what could have changed if Tony went down to autopsy with the evidence from Abby instead of Kate during the episode Bete Noire. It would be easy enough to switch Tony with Kate as the only reason he didn't go was because he was in the head (toilet) so he could of either not been using the head or was just getting back when Abby was asking for him.
A few things would change immediately because of this change for one thing Ducky wouldn't of tried to trick Ari if Tony came down which is what got Gerald shot (I mean what would the point be Tony clearly isn't Abby), plus Tony has a way of gaining information without the bad guys realising or he just ticks them off enough that they say something without thinking or uses some other means to manipulate information out of them (no matter how skilled they are or what advantages they hold as Eli David found out), not to mention his ability to make people focus solely on him even when the room is full of other people (it could also change the whole dynamic of the events that took place after this episode as Ari could be focused more on DiNozzo instead of becoming obsessed with Gibbs, they even share a few similarities with having crappy Fathers obviously Senior isn't anywhere near as bad as Eli but still wasn't the best, very absent disowned his son at the age of 12, kicked him from boarding school to boarding school and finally even a Military Academy).
Anyway enough rambling, great work on this story.
| Aaaamy chapter 15 . 7/5/2010
| books-n-cookies chapter 15 . 12/19/2009
yay! :D that was such a great story! :) i loved it! great job!
| Manic Penguin chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
if there's one thing i know it's that over ninety percent of restaurants in DC never close. now, finding GOOD food twenty-four hours a day is tricky, but still not impossible. the only thing that Washington is really lacking is good Mexican. at least, that's how it was the last time i was there.
| artificiallysweet chapter 15 . 7/24/2006
Hey, that was so cute. i loved that so much. good work.
| Trickster's Queen of War chapter 15 . 2/8/2006
loved it from beging to end!
| LVB chapter 15 . 2/8/2006
It was a long ride but I'm glad I stuck around. The first e p of new season of NCIS just screened in Aus. and I was desperate for a Tate pickmeup.
A lovely way to end the story. Congratulations on finishing.
| glowing-ice chapter 15 . 2/8/2006
Hey, cool, great job on the ending. Just a bit of humor was great. I suppose you could have made it longer and incorporated Gibbs, Abby, Ducky, McGee... but I guess you're just pretty tired of the fic by now, heck, 15 chapters, but then again, one of mine is 18... anyway, you were awesome... :) Thanks for the nice experience reading this fic.
| theonewhowrotetatertots chapter 15 . 2/8/2006
Great chapter..."unswaddling" it should be invented, all new mothers do it, I did...I'm putting this on my fave stories list so I can read it again...
| bookwormmel chapter 15 . 2/7/2006
Hi, I am really glad you posted this final chapter. Chapter 14 never really felt like the end. It's a beautiful story with a charming ending.
| jtbwriter chapter 15 . 2/7/2006
Seriously-this was worth the wait-I love Kate's
playing with Tony-and Tony's willingness to still
name the baby after Gibbs was sweet!
Thanks for a good fic-I look forward to more of
your literary shinanigans!
| glowing-ice chapter 14 . 1/26/2006
I'm so glad I found this fic! I love Kate/Tony fics! It is absolutely adorable, wonderful, sweet... OMG! You have to update. You really HAVE to update. Or else! Bwahahaha! Okay... ignore that last part. Caffeine's just really bad for people... but please update!
| Wheels4TheOneTrueGod chapter 14 . 1/4/2006
Please continue with this story. I want to find out if Kate does indeed have twins and what the sex of the baby is. I really like the way that you portrayed Gibbs' sarcasim. Everything else was great. All the characters were mainly the same from the show - the only thing that I know would not happen was when you said that Gibbs had paced. He would not do that - even if he was concerned.