Reviews for A Slight Miscalculation
Doesn't Matter42 chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
I'm not at al certain I want to know what it says about my wee little brain that I kindasortareallylove this story. But, hell, I do. Good, no, great job writing it. I haven't read the reviews but I am quite certain there are a lot of them absolutely begging for more. LOL, I get that, definitely. It's an interesting dark premise, it's well written, and if your muse ever taps you on the shoulder and insists on chapter 2 or more, I, and many others I presume, will be quite pleased to read more. If not, well, thanks for writing this. Now it's time to go tear through whatever else you have posted.
sportysoftballgirl11 chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Pretty please with cherries on top. Upload more:) loved it!
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
No, no, that ending is fine! Really! My insanely overactive imagination is supplying ALL SORTS of denouements for the story. Hell, I'm out to chapter nine already. You know, the one where Kim has to pull Shego out of the ...

Sorry. My bad. You can write your own chapter nine.

(By the way, I do deeply appreciate your attention to spelling and grammar. And punctuation. Makes the story flow SOOOOO much more easily.)
Rannon Silverthorne chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
After all this time I still love this story!
Terabiel chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
wow. this was really excellent. shame you aren't continung it.
Mechconstrictor chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Pretty good story. As for the ending, the only thing that I didn't like was that it was the ending. Would love to see where this could go.
jquackers chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Too bad there's no continuation.. Would've been nice if there was. It'd be interesting to see what happens next. Good story, though.
ErnestTheGuy chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
omg, that is horrible. you're such a damn tease.
yui1808 chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
nice job...
firelarc chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
nO! no fair. *pouts* still a good stroy.
Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
that sucks that that is the end cause that was a really good story... well like i said, good story! im gonna have to go see if you have any more work...

~Smells like Rain...
Nutpyro chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Really wonderful story. What;s got me thinking though is that you say you're not writing anymore but yet youdidn't mark the fic as complete. That should tell a reader something. Great job!
Sword of Damocles chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
LOL, you jerk. Good story, kind of a lame ending. Wouldn't mind a continuation as this story has alot of pontential in it.
Alexander - Godslayer chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
Nice oneshot for reading at night. _

One little mistake, thought, during the dialog:

"Remember how you stashed the suit in your closet?"

"Told you I'd been here a while. Now shut up and go to sleep before I change my mind and smother you."

Isn't there a line from Kim, or a part of the narrationg regarding her, missing between those lines?

Anyway, pretty nice work, and HOT!

See you around! ;)
AthenaNoel chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
you are so very very very mean! this could be a very very very very popular story and you won't write anymore! unfair!

(yes i know i sound like a lil kid)
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