Reviews for The Innocence Of Guilt |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Seems like you had a lot of plans for this. After so many years, perhaps you could come back and tighten it up some...a tad less humor and a bit more continuity? I know you set it up as a tongue in cheek sort of story, but jumping about gets tiresome to read. You have so many great and intriguing ideas that could make a great dramatic story that has humor, instead of a farcical story that is confusing-ish. I was wondering why Harry didn't use Dobby to get him his 'stuff'. I know he's want his invisibility cloak and his family pictures. Since his friends know he is alive (totally against field craft) they could have dropped them someplace for him. You teased with Mooney, but never brought him back. You never had Harry actually get trained. He is still just a teenager. He should have had intense training and gotten his OWLs and NEWTs under his alias, or a different one. Will he ever be able to be himself? Probably the best bet would be to revert to Peverelle with Pathertrory being his Unspeakable name. I know it's all moot anyway, since you aren't coming back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has been a interesting and fun AU Potterverse and I like your characters. Thing that has always bothered me about the Gringots robbery is did no one think to hire a lawyer to check what was the policy on dark artifacts stored in vaults, after all Gringots raided tombs in Egypt so the Goblins should be aware of soul jars. Maybe they would have gotten a percentage of the confiscated vaults and learned a new way to destroy the things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update, great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh this was great! a lot of fun and engaging characters and story pity it’s discontinued oh well have a lovely life! you brought me laugh and mirth |
![]() ![]() ![]() It has been nearly 11 years since you last updated, so I assume this story has been abandoned. Too bad as it has been very entertaining. I would have liked to see how they infiltrated Gringotts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was dope as hell. RIP |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so crazy I was literally a newborn when this came out. 2 days old HAHAHA cuz my birthdays on May 25 2005 WOW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Section 1? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, whoa is a basic command. Woah, as a word, does not exist. Great writing. Crappy grammar and spelling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He also keeps losing his wands |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems your Harry is frighteningly incompetent. Why is he letting death eaters live? At least he can think on his feet and use what little he knows-but losing two wands and being able to accio them is not competent. Wish Luna was with him |
![]() ![]() su (t) 1/2 at2 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry hasn't robbed Gringotts yet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Skip. Abandoned and mixed Q. |