Reviews for Just One of Those Things
Fred's fanatic chapter 6 . 5/28/2017
Tara it's finally happened these two beautiful life
Lovebirds have kissed just try and break them up now
You vile horrid death eater parents not even hestia
Will be able to part them now that she's discovered
She'd like to be James Remus does know that two of his dearest friends are falling in
Love and he's going to do anything to help their
Dreams come it be absolutely great if
It was both Sirius and bestiary whom were in the
Doorway seeing them kiss like there's no tomorrow
What a wake up call that could be .its time those
Parents knew that it's against the law to enforce
A betrothal neither of their only children had a say
In and start trusting them after all James did marry
Lily they're perfect foe each other as neither are
Perfect both have flaws yet they've triumphed in
The end proving opposites do truly
The greatest most highly original writer with quite
A flair for intriguing scandalous scenarios that will
Always utterly bewitch readers until we're not
Sure whether to laugh or cry I'm doing both but
Mainly the former it's been an exceptionally great
Roller coaster ride which I'm hoping I'll never ever
Get tired of reading all over again daily as its
Enchantingly every time thoroughly enjoyable
Fred's fanatic chapter 5 . 5/28/2017
Poor James he truly did think that his thoroughly
Inept incompetent parents loved him instead they're of the same mind as lord Voldemort or Sirius parents with their pureblood mentality and it's our way or we'll kill
You for not obeying us ,when he said that he was finished with them I would've taken James very very
Seriously indeed he's sick of these stupid rules that
Prevent him being with lily plus she's armed head I wouldn't attempt to intimidate her you'll get to know
That volatile vicious temper she has had since birth.
I'd kill these blights on humanity that call themselves
Parents they're nothing but a vile repulsive obnoxious
Misbegotten bad joke how dare they go this farin
Order to subjugate their only children I'd give them
The cruciatus curse the kapok Avada medal a gone.
Hooray hooray the witches are managed to
Really write such an enchanting awe inspiring story
Full of unexpected twists and turns so powerful yet
Thought provoking amid such great style and lovely
People which is utterly fascinating to read although
I'm on the youngsters side in this war down with the
Parents lets guillotine them thank you for this truly
Gifted work of skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 4 . 5/28/2017
Well I've been hoping that this excellent love story
Could maybe go on for say twenty five chapters as
It's very very addictive in a truly magnificent and
Enthralling way it just allows my own imagination to
Run riot I'm pleased that Lily's not interested in
Sirius it would be rather weird actually so why not try
Sirius andhestia as a brand new couple whom are
Definitely interested in each other plus his family of
Cuckoos apart from his brother are as powerful as
The potters so it would be simply changing grooms
And it would be tremendous to see him with one
Particular attractive witch and is
Proving to be my ultimate favourite jilly romance as
It's thoroughly a truly magical journey through out
Their school years with lots of funny times and drama
Running through every year they've known one
Another via your highly entertaining stupendous
Writing which from the beginning had me hooked
On this exceptionally brilliant love story with very
Mesmerising characters that blow your mind wide
Open taking you on agreat adventure your such a
Awe inspiring writer please could you make this story
Quite s bit longer than it is thank you very much.
Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 3 . 5/28/2017
It was definitely well worth the wait however I'm not
Certain about lily and Sirius as there's no attraction
Flaring between them except as friends although as
Lily's a muggleborn how on earth would she know
About wizarding arranged marriages they're not exactly public knowledge and the parents should be very
Disgusted with their treatment of such exceptionally
Talented grown yo teenagers they have and allow them
To date others plus James getting very very jealous sounds absolutely fascinating over lily though I'd lay
Odds he never kisses hestia as she's not his type of
Witch except made an error myself so
That will hopefully go unnoticed besides Lily's just
Coming to realise she's interested romantically in
James so it's time for some fireworks between best
Friends over the same wonderful guy he's worth
Fighting put such an interesting unique
Spin on their love story it's utterly magical to read
And thoroughly mesmerising with such great
Dramatic tense storylines which have kept me on my
Toes trying to guess most things and having lots of
Fun times doing that an exceptionally amusing wonderful thrilling chapter could you please have
A little bit of fluffy action between James and lily
Soon just to confuse her a tiny bit more than she
Already you so much your totally a superlative
Writer of This genre skinner
Fred's fanatic chapter 2 . 5/28/2017
I'd really love. It if two things could happen the first being their bossy parents allow them to date other people and stop playing god with their children's lives
And secondly that James and Heston choose to rebel
Against this outmoded betrothal which is quite insulting
To parents are beginning to sound like
Voldemort with this bloodline rubbish although did
James say he's got no experience of dating other
Witches really he's the quidditch captain looks sensationally handsome pure blood family that's got
To have him sought after besides he's in love with
Lily Evans so please let the revolution begin now.
This is definitely a very exciting remarkably consistent
High quality brilliant portrayal of the love that has set
People around the Harry Potter world loving his
Parents fiery love story through a magnificent young writer whom can only achieve their dreams in anyway
They choose however I'm very pleased that right now
You've chosen to delightfully entertain readers with
Such an incredible exceptionally fascinating love
Story that will transcend all ages my love
Elizabeth skinner from Australia.
Fred's fanatic chapter 1 . 5/28/2017
It's a shame that James hasn't taken this arranged
Marriage in the vein it could be as a chance to finish nd out if lily really loves him and attempt to make her
Jealous I'm sure Hestia won't mind because I think
She's interested in Sirius anyhow just because of a
Long standing friendship between. Their parents whom
Might want it,they're at hog warts so while James and hesitate are there they could romance their preferred
Partners no one would know they're teenagers after all
Quite loving this lily as now she's calm and
Cool relaxed instead of being irrational venomous uptight
Vindictive malignant etc she's an enchantress now in
Every way it's beautiful I always thought she could be
Fiery and independent without having to be the above
Mentioned towards James and the marauders you've
Written an awe inspiring hilarious witty totally wondrous
Love story that will continue to bewitch readers through
Your exceptionally brilliant imagination which shall
Create some lively scenarios I'm positive full of drama
Love and laughter with the people concerned in hooked
Forever on your skinner
Guest chapter 13 . 5/8/2016
I read it in one goooo..! Beautifully written ️ Loved it
MaximusNightshade8 chapter 7 . 12/16/2015
Another brilliant chapter. I love it. I just had this random thought about how the Marauders could technically walk into the girls dormitories at the school. Simply, all they have to do is transform. It doesn't matter that they're male animals because Crookshanks could still get up there. Theoretically, had they transformed, they could be snogging on the girls' beds anytime they wanted
Anonymous Folk chapter 13 . 5/19/2015
AMAZING! Although if you wanted to continue it I'd do a sequel from Lily and James' honeymoon to the night Voldemort attacks. Although without that it is still AMAZING! I absolutely LOVED IT!
Chameleonxx chapter 13 . 4/30/2015
Hazel McKinley chapter 13 . 4/13/2015
I'll let you know now that I started reading this story a year ago, but because of personal reasons quit it. I was looking around for new fan fictions to read and stumbled upon this one again. I regret the fact that I could not complete this story a year ago, because I know that I would have loved it then and continuously have reread it multiple times. You have my word, that this is one of my favorite fanfics, and I have read a fair few recently. Thank you so much for writing this. It's amazing! You need to write a book, seriously speaking.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/30/2015
This was damn good!
yeecing chapter 13 . 5/11/2014
I cried during the epilogue. it was simply beautiful. they had gone through so many hardships just for that moment. a truly touching scene.
wizards-inmyattic chapter 13 . 5/5/2014
Oh my goodness. This. I couldn't handle it. I laughed, I cried, I groaned when Lily went out with Micah and Hestia started to fancy James (and I'm not going to lie; I was happy when Hestia's parents died because it meant she could end the betrothal with James's parents' consent. I feel a bit bad about it, but...) I feel like this was a better version of Romeo and Juliet. But with a happier ending. And less whiny adolescents. And they actually knew each other. So yeah. But great story, I loved, loved, LOVED it!
SmarterThanArty chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Long chappie...

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