|Reviews for An Up Note|
| anmodo chapter 3 . 6/7/2005
This is very powerful and could just be very close to what actually will happen in the actual series. Good job with using the cell phone picture.
| Jenndifurry chapter 3 . 6/6/2005
OH this is a good one
| Serataya chapter 3 . 6/6/2005
Wow, this is so exciting! Please go on! Great story!
| Jia-naughty chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Im really intrested to see where you take this, it seems like it will be really good. Can't wait for more!
| Frekazoid chapter 3 . 6/4/2005
Plot hole, isn't rafael supposed to be in jail?
| Sammy chapter 3 . 6/4/2005
This story is fascinating! I wonder if it will go this way on the show ... possibly I think!
Please make sure it does end on an 'up note' - you'll make me very sad if you don't!
| Mariel3 chapter 3 . 6/4/2005
This is a really good start to what looks like a really good story. I like the character interaction thus far and they way you are keeping chracters 'in character'. I'm not a M/Ser, but I'm reading on for a number of reasons - this is well written, has an interesting premise, and because I appreciate your telling people up front where you stand on the relationship front but are still treating everyone with respect. It's all cool. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
| Sarie Venea chapter 3 . 6/3/2005
This is pretty good-dear Lord I hope it isn't what they decide to do with the actual show, though! Between CSI and WAT, I am getting high blood pressure!
| val chapter 3 . 6/3/2005
good update soon ! it's a strong story
| Spooky Bibi chapter 3 . 6/3/2005
OMG i thought it was a picture of one of them dead! I'm a little bit relieved! I like how your handling everybody's reaction, especially Sam's. It's subtle and true to the characters. Update soon!
| fairygurl621 chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Looking forward to more. I hope Danny and Martin make it out okay.
| tracy-thenag chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
so waiting for someone to pick up the gauntlet on this one.
good start please do continue!
| Spooky Bibi chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Great start! Please write more, the season's finale is making me crazy too!
| Little Webby chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Great start! I haven't actualy seen the S3 finale yet because it hasn't been shown over here - but from clips on the net and from what I heard, this sounds as viable a start to S4 as I can think.
My only thoughts are might Danny and Martin not survive? I mean, call me a cynic, but are contract negotiations still going on? :P
| Joralie chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Writte more, please continue, it's a good beginnig