Reviews for That Moment in the Tree House
Wanderer3 chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Bow Chica Bow Bow...Bow Chica Bow Bow XD LOL!
Kioshi-Sasayaki chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
this story was cute... not too dirty but then again i have a twisted mind. I love how they stayed in charactor. It played out well and came to a nice close. good job *spins and disappears into a sparkly cloud of dust*
Wysteria Fox chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
You dirty boy...LOL. It was good, and it was nice to see them kept in character.
Ranger117 chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
These emotional fics are among the most interesting, where two teens realize that they need each other... Carry on.
Cold-Chaos chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Its not bad. Its actualy very sweet as well as sexy. Good job.
warprince2000 chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Very cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)
Triaxx2 chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
I loved that. It was well played, without getting to graphic, and a nice, calm finish.
charizardag chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
not bad, not bad, but try to down it on the exclaming (you know, ron cheering HELELUYAH!) other than that, it's good
GargoyleSama chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
Naughty, naughty Forlong. Very well written. A bit of levity at the end to bring it back to the Kimverse. Also, if both of you don't laugh at some point you aren't doing it right.

Bravi, bravi, bravisimi.
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