Reviews for Harry Potter, The Heir Of Magic |
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khatre chapter 1 . 3/23/2021 I still find it kind of strange that No One Ever explains how a Self Fulfiling Prophecy works to Dumbledore. |
OzwaldPendragon chapter 11 . 8/27/2020 honestly I wish that you would just finish the story because I like how you have it now. to me it works. |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/28/2020 Trash |
Reader chapter 10 . 10/20/2019 Didn't you just say, last chapter in fact, that only the person who spilled their own blood could use it for anything related to magic? |
Reader chapter 9 . 10/20/2019 Okay, so here is the revised info on the pairings. Harry's wives- (in the order you seem to be aiming for) Tonks Luna Hermione ? (Hinted to be Fleur, who should be with Bill right now in a serious relationship) Family- Hedwig Higgy Fawkes Ginny Narcissa Bellatrix (as it stands right now, Voldemort has no blood that isn't Harry or Pettigrew's, so why not gut the rat to escape?) |
Reader chapter 7 . 10/20/2019 Wizard grading is strictly (T)roll, (D)readful, (A)cceptable, (EE)Exceeds Expectations and (O)utstanding. There is no plus or minus because these didn't exist two to four hundred years ago. Also, Harry got EE on his potion grade, not an O, because he is only an above average brewer, in spite of Snape's blatant attempts to make him terrible at them. And Harry wasn't as good as his mother at charms. Animagus training is post NEWT work, not OWL level, the Marauders were lucky they didn't turn themselves into piles of torn flesh with their experiments. There is this wonderful thing on your keyboard called a 'space bar.' This other thing called a 'mouse' lets you click anywhere on the screen, such as places where you forgot to makes spaces, to correct your work. |
Reader chapter 6 . 10/20/2019 So subtle. We now know that Harry's wives are: Tonks, Hermione, Luna, Ginny. Bellatrix and Narcissa will probably serve as aunts to him. I'm going to get my friend to work on this idea. He can actually write, though his experience with the HP universe ends with GoF. He can AU it, for the most part. All he needs to know is what the Horcruxes are and where they are. |
Reader chapter 5 . 10/20/2019 It is already established that clearing ones mind makes them MORE vulnerable to mental attacks, not more resistant. After all, before Snape told him to do that, Harry barely got any visions or impression. After all, what sounds like it would work better: a bulletproof shield or thin air? Also remember that when Harry attacked Snape's mind in blind retaliation, Snape put memories forth to block him, not clear his mind. THAT is proof that Snape was weakening Harry's mind, not strengthening it. Seriously, use your brains for something other than stuffing in your skull. |
Reader chapter 3 . 10/20/2019 ...Druids are naturalist wizards and witches, not a whole other race. I think you meant 'Dryads.' And it is 'Dwarves.' You and Pixel both need to go back to school and actually pass the fifth grade, though you are infinitely better than Pixel. His/Her writing makes me want to send a smart missile at their home to end the horrible writing, you make me wish you had a decent beta. |
Reader chapter 2 . 10/20/2019 There was no purpose behind this chapter. You could easily have just put a note at the top of the next chapter that Harry brokered a deal with the Dursleys and had the exact same effect as this chapter. |
Guest chapter 11 . 2/27/2019 please continue this story, i really enjoyed what you have written so far |
dragons9 chapter 11 . 2/28/2018 This is a great story i hope u get someone to adopt this story...as for the wives...can u be with Luna, Daphne, Tonks, Katie and Susan or Tracy...I'm sorry but Hermoine is a best friends like a sister...I dont see them as anything else but that my opinion |
Winged-Ashes chapter 1 . 11/28/2017 HI I just wanted to know if this has been adopted coz it’s a good story... please tell me if it has Thnx |
Guest chapter 11 . 11/27/2017 Could you post an outline of how it was supposed to go? I mean, there are quite a few concurrent threads running right now. |
Guest chapter 11 . 10/11/2017 Why would you end it there! I'm wasn't sure about the whole Harry/ multiple wife aspect but like the Harry/ Luna pairing. I was never a fan of Ron/Hermione |