Reviews for Harry Potter, The Heir Of Magic
80286 chapter 9 . 10/21/2005
Excellent chapter! I'm looking forward to Harry's reactions to the 6 women. You've got a great story going, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Blue Werewolf Boy chapter 9 . 10/21/2005
awsome chapter, so how many is Harry going to be with?
boilingseas chapter 9 . 10/21/2005
UPDATE!

A bloody chapter without the violence. And it's pretty good too. Will Hermione be resistant to love potions now that she has declared hers for Harry?

Getting Bellatrix out should be relatively simple, now that Harry has Fawkes to get him there.

The bit with Ginny was slightly unexpected, but I guess it works alright. That girl's got more brothers than she needs, she should offload some to Malfoy, such as Percy and Ron.

Does Luna have a bit of the Sight? The comment about her sharing Harry with others seems to point in that direction. It should make things very interesting in the future.

After Harry moves from the Dursleys, will he tell people about Higgy? Maybe introduce her originally as a 'counsellor' and guardian; that should stir things up a little, and annoy Fumblemore. He's going to need a little time to get used to all the love around him, but he'll end up all the better for it.

Already hoping for more. Damn, you've got me addicted again.
R-Krulle chapter 9 . 10/21/2005
OK, We need more to this story soon.
A'Strae Abound chapter 8 . 10/20/2005
*sulks* I go and reread all of that only to wait? *sigh*

Oh well.

Good work though.
swordmaster mage chapter 8 . 10/20/2005
hey i jus read ur story its really gd update soon. teh only part that i didn't lik was when harry was told to marry four girls, that i wud have left out because if i was told i wud have 2 marry 2 gels by my 17th birthday i wud be furious(even thou im 18). r u goin to have ron in love with mione as well that will be gd with ron wantin 2 get 1 up on harry but alot of ppl have done that already
pax-draconix chapter 8 . 10/20/2005
Good so far. I take it you found a Beta? If you'd like another one (two Betas are allowed) I'd be glad to volenteer.
Beth5572 chapter 8 . 10/19/2005
I would love to see want you write next.

Thank you,

Terri
jkarr chapter 8 . 10/19/2005
maybe you can have hermione come and tell harry what is going on from her point of view.
thesagerk chapter 8 . 10/19/2005
beautiful...i can't wait for more...its insane how long its been...hopefully th enext chapter will be nice and long...and if u need a beta reader...look me up...

eagerly waiting,

Rishi.
Silo666 chapter 7 . 10/19/2005
hay man make it so bliase is a girl and is a 1/2 vampiere
loneicedragon chapter 8 . 10/19/2005
Please update soon!
yuiop chapter 8 . 10/19/2005
this is great keep it up
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