Reviews for Harry Potter, The Heir Of Magic
Tonksfan543 chapter 5 . 9/29/2005
Awesome! I think its cool. I love a good Ron and Hermione and Dumbledore bashing. Anyway, for the pairings I suggest H/T, H/G, H/LL, H/BL, or H/FD. You don't have to just suggestions. Anyway, Cool, Keep it coming!
WhItEpHoEnIxBlAcKdRaGoN chapter 7 . 9/14/2005
great story can't wait for the next chapter can you speed up the meetings with all the girls? one of my fav stories by far.
UPDATE chapter 7 . 9/11/2005
UPDATE
PersonaJXT chapter 7 . 9/9/2005
Eh, I picked this story because it was on some favorite stories list. It seems to be pretty good, despite the relatively short chapters. However, i am rather sad to see that it seems you have stopped updating this story for you have not update since 6/24/05. Hopefully you'll update this story soon.
Bobboky chapter 7 . 9/9/2005
a most excellent story. i really like what you did with Hogwarts
Gold Viper chapter 7 . 9/9/2005
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knuckz chapter 7 . 9/8/2005
hm
Jeremy chapter 7 . 9/6/2005
I really hope you haven't abandonded this story, it's a great start, and I think it will only get even better. KEEP WRITING!
Bukama Stealth chapter 4 . 9/4/2005
I forgot about to write about the vampire bonding. A vampire's bonding should be something simple but effective, like a blood sharing gaining the best of each other's abilities.
Bukama Stealth chapter 3 . 9/4/2005
Well I know that Veela's are very possesive and jealous beings so I think the ritual would need to be something visible that marks their mate as theirs.

I'm thinking either a tatoo, a lock of silver hair or a set of wings (due to the Veela's avian nature).

Bukama
GoldGriffin Vipertooth chapter 7 . 9/2/2005
update
Scrodinger chapter 7 . 8/29/2005
I thought you said you had 25 chapters written. Where are the updates for the last month(s) then? Please update this soon, I want to read more.
xxdreamlessxx chapter 7 . 8/28/2005
hey. i love this story plz keep on going!
Laken2 chapter 7 . 8/28/2005
keep going it is good I like it. please dont end it here.
Treck chapter 6 . 8/16/2005
Update soon please
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