| Reviews for Harry Potter, The Heir Of Magic |
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   Luke Dragneel chapter 11 . 3/14/2012 I am sorry to read that you abandoned this story completely, as I for one think it had a good plot line, it was just a little jumpy here and there. I would like to give you some advice about this story: Take some of your major plots and make a new story using them. I liked the idea with Bella and Cissy, you where headed in the right direction you just forgot that the deep end doesn't have floaties. What I am trying to say is that even though you have abandoned this story, don't abandoned the plot schemes or ideas that you got from this story, just perfect them so that you can make them mesh without having it blow up in your face. As always Avid Reader/Writer, Cam~,., |
| Elvin Master Assassin chapter 11 . 12/20/2011 Ae you going to post somthing if its adopted? |
| Sean Malloy-1 chapter 11 . 7/24/2011 Just delete this then. |
| fanofmany chapter 11 . 5/15/2011 T-T |
| Moongirl1012 chapter 11 . 1/23/2011 Will you let me know who adopts this story. I'm hanging on the edge of suspense here. Practically dying! |
| Lerris chapter 5 . 10/18/2010 Well a harem is usually a minus story wise, since they usually seem far to easy to be realistic. The other point I noticed is you need to be a bit more subtle. For instance the book could have said, "It is important to avoid any kind of mental attacks during the early stages of learning occlumency since they destroy the foundation you are building," rather than the more obvious reference to Snape. |
| WhiteElfElder chapter 11 . 9/21/2010 Too bad you abandoned this story, it was going good. |
| Ralmidaz chapter 11 . 9/9/2010 Good story Shame its abandoned so long and thanks for all the fish Thx Tom |
| omh666 chapter 10 . 8/27/2010 First I'm guessing that it's Bella on the other side of the door. Second I had a question to ask but didn't like asking it in a review with nothing else in said review. If Harry's room is able to do that time delay thing and the book he is using for training does that time delay thing. Then can they both be activated to give him a compound time delay? |
| els2010 chapter 11 . 6/7/2010 Ah come on wats with the cliffie no fair real good story though so far I hope u continue it els2010 out ] |
| echomoon chapter 11 . 5/23/2010 did anyone pick up hte story? cuz this is really good, and i want to know what happenes next... |
| Cassandra30 chapter 10 . 3/1/2010 Awesome! Well done! |
| Cassandra30 chapter 9 . 3/1/2010 Most excellent! Highly innovative! |
| Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 3/1/2010 I am glad someone is telling Harry some truth. |
| Cassandra30 chapter 6 . 3/1/2010 Totally terrific! |