i like the fic but multiple wives? ah well the storys so good itl make up for it but belatrix narcisa imean i like the way you put them but harry wives?

Great Stuff! I like that you went to all of the girls.

You may have some trouble getting Hermione and Luna to get along. Hermione just doesn't understand Luna's kind of thinking. That may cause some trouble. Hermione had better find some way to tell Harry that Her and Ron are in the Order, or he may be VERY angry with her later.

Tonks just rocks.

I like how you are showing Narcissa, I think that you have it just right. Lucius is sterile, Draco is an asshole, and she wants out. I like how you are showing Bellatrix also. I hope that Harry will get them out of their situations soon.

This is a very busy transitional chapter. I almost felt sorry for Dumbledore...almost. Hopefully the females who will play a part in the Dark Lord's fall will help break Dumbledore's grip on Harry's life.

Whoa... Look like that Harry is going to have his Harem! let see it's Hermione,Ginny,Luna,Narcissa,Bellatrix,Tonks... Hmm look like a even spilt between young and mature womens for Harry. :p my mind is out of control... imaging them in sack with Harry! Harry will die happy! I would! :P

Great story, but i think that Dumbledore is alittle too cruel in your fic, but i like the story anyways. Keep up the good work!

i definately agree that dumbledore does not have harry's best interests at heart...narcissa is an interesting choice, as is bellatrx

Great chapter! From what I have gathered now it looks as if the main ship will be Harry/Hermione/Ginny/Luna and Tonks with a possibility of adding Narssisa and Bellatrix into the mix. Very unique and entertaining, few would suggest such an odd ship. I find it rather fasinating and eagerly look forward to your next chapter. Good luck on your future chapters.

DragonMaster

I just came across your story and I like what you have written so far. I am looking forward to future updates. It looks like Dumbledore is about to start loseing all his followers except stupid people like Ron and maybe his mother.

Great chapter. You are lining the ducks all up in a row for Harry's inspection. This should make an interesting day for owl corespondence.

A punishment for Dumbledore...should be something publicly humiliating that will lower him in the eyes of the public that he so adores for them to adore him. This demonstration should also raise Harry the final step above where Dumbledore ever was in the magical public (an added twist to the punishment for Dumbledore).

Thanks for writing.

Mike.

good chapter, awaits the next, byes

Good Chapter! So there's quite a bit goning on here besides Harry. I can't wait to see what you have planned next. Keep up the good work and update again soon!

"I can’t, I’m smokin’ a salmon."- Aldo

"Put it out, get Anthony, and stash him somewhere, but not in my office."- Angelo "Snaps" Provolone

Interesting chapters (4-6). I find it surprising that Ginny would read "Hogwarts: A History". Not that I don't think that Ginny would read, it's just that she doesn't strike me as the type to take an interest in Hermione's favorite book, I think.

Luna, no clue, as she if I understand this correctly is a new character. May have to go back and look at the books again. BTW: I checked White Tiger etc. list. It's an interesting one, but there's a small problem. Several of those are from the movies. Most of them aren't developed characters, of course you knew that, silly me.

I think I've got it figured out. There are several villians/bad guys, but different types. Voldermort or Tommy Boy (Not Chris Farley)the classic villain; Albus Dumbledore is a bad guy, but not like Voldermort, but because of the falling out with Harry.

Ron of course isn't exactly a bad guy either. The way I see it, he's a bit envious of Harry because Harry's the hero, and he's the youngest of six boys, and the older brother of Ginny. Nor is as brillant as Hermione. This of course is understandable. I think I have this right. Hermione, is also misguided, because she thinks Harry will join the Order etc.

I hope that Doc Rowling will develope some of the characters, like Daphne.

Keep up the good work. HP/DG forever.

Update soon

how about past your chapters together so there some decent leanth to them, there way to short,

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how you had an air of mystery of who Harry's wives might be. Please update soon.