Reviews for Eve of All Power
Carriethekitten chapter 14 . 12/3/2005
this is the weirdest and must unbelieveable ending i've ever read.
Different Child chapter 4 . 9/22/2005
Different Child chapter 14 . 7/4/2005
This was one odd story. The end was from Touko's point of view. Intersting.
AlwaysForgotten chapter 2 . 7/3/2005
Aye, just finished chapter two. You need to space things out more, it makes it easier to read and it makes it look nicer.
AlwaysForgotten chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Short first chapter...but it seems to be just an intro. Anyways, I suggest not making all of your sentences so short next time. You overrused that technique. :)
shesamonster chapter 13 . 6/28/2005
Tylec Asroc chapter 2 . 6/5/2005
Ack! Interesting concept in the summary, but the formatting makes this a torture to read! This could do with some white space, please.
shesamonster chapter 8 . 5/29/2005
And spelling. You need to fix the spelling.
shesamonster chapter 9 . 5/29/2005
You need to fix the format so that there is space in between paragraphs and lines where people talk. I was having the hardest time reading this.