|Reviews for Survivor's Epitaph|
| DianeB chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
Bang-on with Janeway and Chakotay regarding whether or not to share the third Janeway's recording with the crew.
"Preoccupied gloom." I like that. I mean, it was pretty much exactly how they were feeling, but that was a perfect, succinct description of it.
I think I found a stray word! "know" In the seventh paragraph after the one in which "preoccupied gloom" appears. Uh oh, found another type, but...nevermind. Who cares? Not me!
My God, what an intensely detailed, tragic and ugly chapter. I hate the Vidiians all over again! But I loved Sandrine's words: "Live. Be their immortality."
Still, your ending really whipped me. VERY well done.
| DianeB chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
"Symbol was sacred, as was the human body. But the destruction of both could be as well, if the sentiment fueling it strengthened the living, or remembered the dead." Fantastic narration, and so *perfectly* Chakotay. Brava.
This was a tightly-written, dark little chapter, and I can just feel what's coming.
Hey, do you miss those fanzines? I do! Well, I miss all the artwork. There was so much good, original art that went into a lot of the 'zines, and that work is difficult - if not downright impossible - to capture online.
| starrylaa chapter 2 . 2/24/2009
That was wonderful. Very, very dark. But very chilling. It gave me goosebumps. I almost wish there was an episode like this. What an impact it would have made. I feel very sad now! But good job
| eveningspirit1 chapter 2 . 6/5/2005
dark, creepy and scary. reaction of "living" characters very true-to-life. good work.