|Reviews for Your Best Nightmare|
| rae1112 chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
ok, i kep telling myself im gonna review this, and i never do!
too late now though, eh? i mean, ya aint gonna read it...
| gryffingirl77 chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
I really liked this story. I'm assuming you are British? The only advice I would have for you is that the American characters use a lot of British slang...nothing wrong with that, I'm as American as they come and say plenty of 'em due to the amount of Harry Potter I read, but some of the phrases seemed a little un-Jordanlike. Also, Katie would most likely not have called Jordan Mum, as that's a pretty British phrase.
That being said, THIS IS NOT A FLAME! I loved the story and I love your writing! You portray Nigel perfectly. Anyway, good job, I loved it!
| toostupidforyou chapter 1 . 7/25/2005
That was bloody brillaint. Keep up the good work.