Reviews for Laden
girlfic chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
This is brilliant and a long time waiting! Thanks! I love Elliot and Oliva stories!

shippergrl25 chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
aw! Loved it! cute and fluffy. my fave was the part at the end when they put their hands over their hearts. so cute and fluffy. awesome story!
vix8 chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
hey great ending i liked this story but it was a bit short you did a good job
boredsvunut chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
I know you wrote 'end', but this has the potential to continue into a good E/O fic. I'm going to encourage you to continue. Sometimes, we write something short and then go back and decide to continue it. I've done it.
Dark Gotham chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
I don't normally review S.V.U stories because I tend to be disappointed towards the end of a story or chapter. But this one is really good. I can see Elliot feeling this way on a day to day basis, and trying so desperately not letting any one else see his pain. I like the fact that it was Olivia who help him through ... All though the paring kind of squeaks for me. You managed to pull this one off well.
tria246815 chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
i love this story it is so cute :) you should write a sequel
Vengeful chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
very nice. i liked it a lot.
Mucada chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
*grins like a fool* A mildly happy ending for them, eh? I liked the last scene the best. :)
Tena chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
I really like this story. It's so believable.
Touchstone chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
I LOVED IT! Vey well written and true to character!
Poeticpunk777 chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Aww! So cute!

jane chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
hi there, just want to encourage you to write more svu fics. i'll read them all. :)
Heather chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
I LOVED IT! It was amazing and very realistic. Good job.