|Reviews for The Awakening|
| orionastro chapter 12 . 10/11/2014
very good story so far , i hope that the Asgard are saved , and that the decepticons , are crushed once and for All . Cant hardly wait for the next chapters .
| MewLover chapter 2 . 9/1/2014
This is really cool, all the science is making my head spin figuratively speaking of course
| MewLover chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
This is pretty cool my friend
| Anonymous BW FanGirl chapter 7 . 4/21/2012
Oh my gosh, this chapter and the last one have had me in stitches! I especially love Carter going nuts!
By the way, I totally share Ironhide opinion of the Goa'uld in chapter 6!
| Anonymous BW FanGirl chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Awesome job. I especially love the Waspinator reference!
| Foxbear chapter 12 . 3/19/2012
And the beginning of a grand adventure.
Now what is going to happen when the snaked come back?
| Foxbear chapter 6 . 3/19/2012
Oh Prime, she reacted exactly the same way...
Someone had better keep Wheeljack and Carter apart.
| Foxbear chapter 5 . 3/19/2012
Omega Supreme, quite the conversation stopper.
Looking forward to more.
| Foxbear chapter 3 . 3/19/2012
See? Sam did have a spasm! :) can I call it or what.
You have an excellent ability to capture the essence of both shows without sacrificing either in the telling.
I can't wait until Sam meet preceptor.
| Foxbear chapter 2 . 3/19/2012
Oh my, Sam must be having a spasm of glee.
| Foxbear chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Fascinating start to a story.
I can't wait to see where you take this.
Excellent grammar and sentence structure.
| Sekhem chapter 6 . 10/13/2011
Why do I get the feeling that Wheeljack and Carter meeting would be a terrifying proposition for everyone involved?
| Phantom 4 Life chapter 12 . 5/15/2010
Good story. I love your characterizations and dialogue. I only have a few complaints about your punctuation and some occasional spelling errors. Now a few questions: Will Grimlock be as powerful as Megatron or Optimus, as it is in the comics?
| Alexander Ripley chapter 12 . 2/7/2010
A very intriguing story :)
| GrimlockX4 chapter 12 . 11/30/2009
This is getting good every sentence I read, keep up the good work!