Reviews for Kyle's Secret
brodystarr chapter 6 . 6/30/2006
The story was cool, great job
Stars2Heaven chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
AWW CUTE! HEY LIN? SHALL I MAKE THAT COMPLETE SAVAGES STORY THAT I SAID WAS MY DREAM? LOL! TELL ME WHEN U GO ON LINE OK? GOOD STORY!
sweetypie15 chapter 6 . 9/23/2005
AWESOME.

THANKS.
sweetypie15 chapter 5 . 9/15/2005
OH MY GOD you are evil he's gay i so did not see that comeing you you evil thing you love the story update soon AWESOME new chapter.

THANKS.
sweetypie15 chapter 4 . 8/23/2005
AWESOME story update soon.

THANKS.
RIchard chapter 3 . 6/21/2005
please go on, i just got into COMPLETE SAVAGES and your story reflects the mood of the show very well. please finish i cant wait
sweetypie15 chapter 3 . 6/7/2005
Hey like the story so whats the secret you can tell me im like yeah so yeah.

THANKS.
Jennifer chapter 2 . 6/6/2005
hey lin ur story is really good i only found one error and it was...that u said boring twice in the first line of ur story otherwise ur stories great it has a good plot and has a beginning that draws the reader in which is pretty hard to pull off i think this might turn out to be one of ur best i cant wait to go on with it good luck!
The Simon Cowell of FFnet chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
How old are you? 12? Your diologue sucks. Sucks, sucks, sucks, sucks. Read some literary classics before you write any more fiction; that way you can find out what good writing has that yours doesn't.

Read at least one of these before you attempt to write anoter chapter of this story.

One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest

The Great Gatsby

The Adventures of Tom Sawyer

The Catcher in the Rye

Bless Me Ultima