Reviews for After Affects
loyalher090 chapter 5 . 12/13/2005
to put it lightly, that sucked BADLY!
naomi-chan chapter 5 . 6/4/2005
This was a nice story. Sad in the beginning, but the ending was sweet, I liked it -
MirandaRoche chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
oh thats sad...please review...i want to know what happens
The Simon Cowell of FFnet chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
You sir, do not know how to use a comma.

Dragon Ball Z was never known for its good script writing or gripping plot; creating some angsty bullshit with suicide tones does nothing for readers - not to mention that usually when talking about suicide, especially with people who used to be generally happy, the conversation tends to be a hell of a lot more subtle in its conclusion; rarely do conversations involving the ending of ones life result in an exclamation of "SUICIDE!" at the end of the sentence. Retard.