Reviews for The Color Black Red
aquafinaSEK chapter 11 . 10/22/2005
Gr8 story. The ending was fab but some parts in the middle were confusing. Good Job!
Seventh Bell Astarael chapter 11 . 10/6/2005
OMIGOSH! -huggletackleglomp- I luff chu Kiwi! Yeah...

I remember a while ago (months and months) before this was up here or anything, and we were being silly and comparing stories and when you showed me the beginning of it. That's why I read it. This last chappi ish so goob.
Valerie chapter 11 . 7/15/2005
OMG this is so good it made me cry ... my mom's like, 'whats wrong with you?' it was sort of funny...



great story

bub eye now

maxy-chan chapter 11 . 7/9/2005
I've got one thing to say: SOB!

OMG This is such a sad ending... Kenshin's gonna die of grief! I'm really crying now... such a sad ending... aww this reminds me of the ending of the OVA's (the Seishouen OVA's (did I write that OK?))

Anyway, this was really unexpected (the whole story), it's a lot darker than 'Before The Dawn'...

Write a happy fic now, I need it! I. Need. To. Laugh! SOB SOB SOB SOB...
StormHornet chapter 11 . 7/9/2005
OMG this was so good! I loved it; you're a great writer! See you soon...

maxy-chan chapter 10 . 7/7/2005
Oh man, now you've done it! You made me cry! Seriously, I'm cryin right now! I hate you! Okay, so I hate everyone who makes me cry for a minute or so, hehe... So don't worry! Okay, you should worry if you don't bring Kaoru back! Cuz I don't like Kenni to be so SAADD! And don't you dare make a... blubbery... awful... so dramatic that it makes you sick... ending of Kenshin being killed (or killed himself) and they're happy in heaven, cuz I don't believe in heaven right now... and don't make Kenshin walk away with Hotaru, or Misao! Or anyone else!

I'm sorry if I'm really mean right now, but I'm kinda pissed off because of the bomb attack in London... I don't live there, but I'm still pissed... oh well, I'm sorry if I'm totally irritating you right now... GOMEN!

StormHornet chapter 10 . 7/6/2005

Good as always, Kiwibear!

Wo! Only one chapter to go! Huh... thats funny... its exactly the same number of chapters as Before The Dawn... huh.


P.S. In Phantom, why do they call Raoul 'Ral'?

Mispronunciation! GASP!
StormHornet chapter 9 . 7/5/2005
u killed Kaoru! and Daemon too! (why couldn't Kenshin have just died in the battle?)

Wow thats reely sad I'm tearing...

Update soon (yay I can finally say that!)

StormHornet chapter 8 . 7/5/2005
They finally meet up! yay I like! aww how cute they kissed thats adorable... poor hotaru... NOT!


StormHornet chapter 7 . 7/5/2005
Misao you b*! wow I love cursing...

So much fun!

I would tell u to update soon except you've already updated to chapter 8... I just love reviewing every chapter!

StormHornet chapter 6 . 7/5/2005
Ha ha! I hope Hotaru falls off the horse and breaks her neck... err... I didn't say that... heh... heh...

Anyway, that whole scene with the bartender and co was cute.


StormHornet chapter 5 . 7/5/2005
Ho... tar... u... ! % *&#!

See look Hotaru has the word 'ho' in it and thats what she is! (I am hoping u will not take offense cuz I'm ur bestest westest estest friend!)


StormHornet chapter 4 . 7/5/2005
Misao... I always liked her character but now I want to kill her!

If she dumped Aoshi then I get him! ::pounces::


P.S. Isn't Brad Pitt so ugly?
StormHornet chapter 3 . 7/5/2005
Wow, you REALLY kicked that flamer's a**!

Good for you, Kiwibear.

Oh kami I know what happens next ::cries:: so sad and you wrote it so well!

I like the intensity of the thing with Kaoru and Kenshin and the 'no you don't' etc etc.

StormHornet chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
Wow, you kicked the flamer's a**!

I hate flames. They are pointless and stupid and the people who write them are IDIOTS.

Nice chappie I hate Chizuru. I hate her character in the manga too. ::strangles::


P.S. I really like that idea of doing Phantom! Please post it soon!
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