Reviews for The Beginnings of Akatsuki
Mime Harlequin chapter 4 . 11/24/2006
Nice! But it is Orochimaru, Orouchimaru, and if I am not wrong, youre watching Bleach!

Oh, and Im sorry for writing the "grammar mistakes" in the Naruto "language", but I have a tendency to do that.

Cant wait for the next chapter,

Mime Harlequin chapter 3 . 11/24/2006
Nice, and wellwritten, except for he fct that it is "Rasengan", not "Ransengan".
Mime Harlequin chapter 2 . 11/24/2006
Nice! But it isnt "jitsu" its "jutsu".
LakErgUrL262 chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Very good. I like how you made it into a script instead of an original story format.

Just a little advice, I would advise you to accept anonymous reviews, because there are people who aren't members of fanfiction but do enjoy reading stories off of the site, so give those people a chance, too.