|Reviews for Fraternity|
| Elemarth chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Very good! It makes me realize how little I know about Obi-Wan and how he felt.
| Vivid Butterfly chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
That was awesome. And yeah, the thing of the brothers is true, how in all stories one is favored and one is angry.
I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who uses second person, though I haven't used it in awhile.
| luvin aoshi chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
*adds to faves*
| cherryblossomjen chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
What heart-renching yet beautiful angst. Well done!
| CyborgRockStar chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
drama. cool fic, well-written.
have a nice day :)
| namjai chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Since I've had my own post-RotS Obi-Wan idea percolating in my head and may write it down, I probably shouldn't be clouding that by reading other people's - but then I give in to temptation, and yours was definitely worth it! Well-written, and a moving, believable contemplation on his decision to leave Anakin there to die. I'm going to add it to my favorites list and check out what else you may have written. *going off to do so now*
| Lily-Magnolia chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
Wonderful, I've been wanting to see deeper from Obi-Wan's perspective so this is a good one. So sad for him *Sniff* Update!
| Lady ot Rings chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Beautiful, simply beautiful! I love how you say "you" instead of "I" and "me"...makes for an even more interesting read and shows how Obi feels distanced from everything. I love how "Because brothers should not kill each other" reappears throughout the whole thing, it brings the fic full circle. And so does the theme about Masters talking with their Apprentices. Great piece of work, keep it up!