|Reviews for My Will|
| CornflowerBlue chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Wonderful story! This is perhaps one of the best fics I've read exploring the Lina-Gourry tandem. The right amount of goodness without the sticky cheese. :) I'm glad I managed to read this though this was written years ago. Thank you for posting. This will definitely go to my favorites.
| Kitsuma chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
So cute! I can't believe Gourry was able to set Lina up.
| serenityselena chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
nice one _
| Lady Dark Angel chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
XD I like
| German girl chapter 1 . 12/4/2007
That was so cute! really sweet! Good job
| Ahria chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
This was really cute. I liked it! I can't believe I'd never read it... ; Anyway, good job, like always. _
| Disbelief Suspended chapter 1 . 8/6/2006
Aww, very sweet. And quite amusing. Great job. -
| Starkiller chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
That was perfect! Not at all sappy and your characterisation was exceptional. Added the story to my favs :)
| FrequencyQueen chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
Another instance of Gourry showing surprising intelligence! Nice IC story!
| Omoni chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
Very well done. In character and very interesting.
| KC Whitestar chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
I loved it! that was a sweet fan fic Keep up the great work
| Silvershark chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
Xelloss tap-dancing naked across the street...
Now that's something I wouldn't mind seein'.
But anyway, good job on the whole romance issue. It is definitely one way to see how Lina and Gourry actually get together. Considering Lina's perspective, she would definitely not know how to deal with the emotional issues, and yes Gourry is a harder character to write, because generally everything is through the eyes of Lina. What can I say, but I liked your version of events. Great job.
| Ai-Chan chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
o.o! This was your first slayers fic...? Can i borrow your talent please? you have so much... just a little? ;.; lol your awsome
| kimonoprincess chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
that was a great story! i love it!
Kouga is Mine
| Kaitrin chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
*blush* I inspired a fic! I'm so honored! (I remember when it was other people's writing inspiring me!)
*clears throat* Anyways. Enjoyable fic. I think you're right about having Lina's tone down. She came through very well. Gourry is tough, mainly because there are so many different models for him (anime, manga, and novels (and fannon of course)), whereas Lina is pretty consistent throughout. Your Gourry is believable, and I liked the part about going for ice cream. Very IC for him, even if some would complain he's not smart enough to scheme (to which I reply that they should read the novels *coughs*)
Parts of the plot seemed a bit rushed. I'd like to see a bit more exploration of Lina's feelings (but I'm an angst freak . . . could be personal taste), for example, or just a bit more description of her moving from one feeling to another. It seemed strange to me that Lina wouldn't want to talk about the events in the tavern, but was perfectly happy to talk about them on a crowded street, and given the fact that she was antsy, I didn't expect them to head towards the palace, but instead out of town.
Otherwise, an enjoyable story, and I hope your longer piece works out!