Reviews for Silent Shattering
Romanse chapter 5 . 7/7/2006
No matter how you feel about this story, this remains one of my all time favorites in the fadom, even now oh so many years later after having read it the first time.

There is NOTHING wrong about writing about the subject of rape. It happens. Your story is sensitve, instructional and HAS A POSITIVE PURPOSE!
Skye Scape chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Ah... I love it. Glad you reposted.
obi fan chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
that was really angsty...

yay for angst

u rock, im so glad that you reposted this
heng huo chapter 5 . 3/7/2006
omg i loved that crying sceen
Jenni chapter 5 . 9/8/2005
Well done. I believe you got the characters and emotions down perfectly. A near rape or rape itself is not an easy subject for anyone to talk about.

Well done indeed.

I plan on reading the sequel later.

Laura of Maychoria chapter 5 . 8/31/2005
This is an incredible story. It is a difficult subject, but you write with great sensitivity and power. I've re-read it several times already, and the ending with Qui-Gon always gets me. You can just feel the pain of them both there, and Qui-Gon's understanding and love for his son is so powerful. I love it. You did a truly wonderful job.

And as another person who has had a brush with abuse, I can also say that you described the feelings and fears surrounding that extremely well. It doesn't matter if it didn't go "all the way"-just being touched in such a manner can have devastating impact, especially on young people.

Thank you for writing this! The sequel is also wonderful.
YodasPatawan chapter 5 . 8/30/2005
Do u noe how good your story was? It is 4.15 in the morning and i was supposed to go to bed hours ago! but this was just SO GOD I kept reading! It was Amazing!
ally127 chapter 5 . 7/18/2005
wow... i started reading the first chapter and just couldn't stop! this was such a great fic! i applaud your greatness. onward to the sequel! )
thecatgoesmoo chapter 5 . 6/17/2005
That was soo good!

My love for Obi-Wan has increased after reading your fic! Aw.. it's so sad though. The end with Qui-Gon made me almost cry... poor Obi!

Your really good and shoudl keep up the good work! :)

*high five*
Kuro-shiro-neko chapter 5 . 6/14/2005

Yup, that about sums it up!


I'm just THAT happy w/ your fic.
ak-stinger chapter 5 . 6/12/2005
I'm so glad that you reposted both this story and it's sequel. Not only are you an extremely gifted writer and that shows here; but also the fact that while rape and attempted rape are very difficult topics you present it all in a very respectful way. Too many fanfictions out there make light of it (people recovering too quickly or worse falling in love with their rapists) and it's important to have stories that balance those out. Thank you for writing and sharing such insightful and empathetic stories.
Jedi Master Moose Ass chapter 5 . 6/7/2005
Cheers! Lovesit totally!

u r such a good riter!
Jedi Master Moose Ass chapter 3 . 6/7/2005
porr Obi Wan! I feel horrible for him

i like Obi wan and to think that hes so distreesed is horrible!

i reckon this fic is reaaly weel described, with tons opf weel writeen emotion.

great fic
Fioreth chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
You said in your repost that you took your fics down because you where uncomfortable with the subject material, but i wanted to thank you for putting them up. I myself went through an almost rape experience, and i can remember sitting in my room at my desk the next day, feeling so cold, not wanting to tell anyone because i would get an i told you so or they would discount it because it wasn't a full rape, but it stays with me just as much. So cheers to you, for having the guts to post this. I hope those like myself that read it and have gone through the same experience can benefit from it, maybe if they can't say it themselves there is comfort in someone saying to for them.
Mae chapter 5 . 6/2/2005
::IS TEARY EYED:: Poor Obi. I just want to hold him and squeeze him and reassure him that everything will be alright.
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