Reviews for Punishment
machievelli chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
To be posted 16 July 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents.

Post TSL; The Exile is captured as an act of revenge

The piece had me a bit confused because the enemy is unclear. They are reminiscent of the Yuuzhan Vong of later years with their bio-engineered tools, yet seem to have some past with the people of the KOTOR period.
Clover64 chapter 2 . 8/22/2005
Pretty good with the exception that(and this is totally my opinion so ignore it if you want and no harm meant) Mical never really 'lusted' after anyone. I don't see Mical the type to lust after anyone(with the exception the exile if you could even call it lusting after) and even then he was polite and that's about it. Other than that it is an entertaining story!
Rei Talyn chapter 2 . 8/2/2005
Nice - very interesting and different
Rei Talyn chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Yikes! Issues, people, Issues!
Shadows Run chapter 2 . 6/3/2005
O, chilling ending lines. Yes, the Shades are blood thirsty, much like HK only without a kind Master to tone the killing down... O Shades taking other peoples forms is creepy... Shiver. can't wait for next chapter.