Reviews for An oppotunity not to be missed
wonderwoman1970 chapter 16 . 7/20/2013
ok now the waiting period for the next chapter...this has been most enjoyable
wonderwoman1970 chapter 15 . 7/20/2013
Even though I like this Urgo I do hope that he gets out of them soon.
wonderwoman1970 chapter 14 . 7/20/2013
great chapter love the family bonding
wonderwoman1970 chapter 13 . 7/20/2013
yes! mama and the papa and baby Grace
wonderwoman1970 chapter 12 . 7/20/2013
ahhh hahahahahah lol lmbo oh woopie dang daniel such a lil pain in the rear so much like a lil brother but perfect this was hilarious
wonderwoman1970 chapter 11 . 7/20/2013
haahahahahah this was great was cracking up with their fun
wonderwoman1970 chapter 10 . 7/20/2013
cute love the jello connection to sam and the quirkiness of jack in Ally
wonderwoman1970 chapter 8 . 7/20/2013
George is being a bit like Jacob kinda getting that he's not liking that sam and jack may be together I don't know how to word it but there is something there with George and his attitude towards them but still a great read so far
wonderwoman1970 chapter 7 . 7/20/2013
oh wow this is deep you can feel everyones emotions and shocks nice writing feeling the pain and worry
wonderwoman1970 chapter 6 . 7/20/2013
dads are so important in a girls life too bad that there are so many out there in reality that don't realize that. but jack is a wonderful example of that kinda dad that is what ever little girl needs. loving this story.
wonderwoman1970 chapter 4 . 7/20/2013
wow this is so awesome! sometimes even though these are wonderful and creative stories the way writers like you express a reader just can't help but feel all the emotion that these characters are facing and that hug is in its way revealed everything love, joy, hope, family to sam and jack whom many have and funny still are rooting for to always remain together. making that point that jack states in thread that he'd be there for sam always. really enjoying your story.
wonderwoman1970 chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
nice really nice
mee chapter 16 . 2/8/2013
I really like this u shouldnt have dropped posting...
nogigglingmajor chapter 16 . 3/21/2006
Well come on dang it! Update! I'm on the edge of my seat!
deathstreet89 chapter 16 . 10/1/2005
Great chaap
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