|Reviews for To Free A Phoenix|
| C.Corina chapter 3 . 1/7/2012
I have to say ...I love this story , it's a good break from the usual kaiHilary fictions and story line is very nice.(I just hope there would be more intimet moments betwen the two)
| PWN3D chapter 9 . 2/10/2010
This story is great..like..it's prologue worthy! Great job, even though you might never update it again, it's still fabulous
| FlamingIce94 chapter 9 . 2/15/2008
This is a great story. Please update soon you're at the best part.
| Ari chapter 9 . 8/28/2007
great story. lvd it . plz try to update son
| Taz chapter 9 . 3/1/2007
U must continue this. Its AWESOME!
| 999Shikaku999 chapter 9 . 2/21/2007
| PerfectInsanity chapter 9 . 10/26/2006
The story was really good! I really liked it! Im sorry to say it but I have a certain distaste of Hilary but what can u do. Thats the only thing i didn't like.. But besides that the story was great! Please post the next chapter soon!
| Ba1thazar chapter 9 . 8/11/2006
i Love ur book
Cant wait for the next one to come out. Is Dragoon gonna come out of the blade to help out Dranzer?
It it did it would be awsome
BCP (Put ur head om ur right shoulder if u cant read it, look 4 a smiley face)
| Anime Onnanoko chapter 9 . 4/23/2006
good chapter plz update soon
| Akki Tenshi chapter 9 . 3/31/2006
Nice Story...no wait...Awsomee Story...love iti ...hate boriss...mann hes so evil...nywayz really wanna know what happens next...update soon
| purpleeyednekoyoukai chapter 9 . 3/11/2006
emma: death threats? how stupid..
kira: some ppl are just desparate...
kai: or stupid
emma: HEY! you're kai takashi, not kai hiwatari!
kai: deal w/it!
emma: that's it! back to the drawing board! *grabs kai and a pencil and starts erasing things*
kira: this does not bode well...my boyfriend is gonna be a pile of ashes...T_T
ashes: he CAN'T be a pile of me!
emma & kai: when did you get here? you're grounded!
ashes: *shrugs* i came looking for kurama and i kinda got lost...
emma: only you ashes...
ashes: now you sound like nuku!
emma: good ra...have mercy upon me! T_T
kira & kai: ?_?
ashes: don't ask, and she got you to stop acting like kai hiwatari...god he is ugly
emma: *flames in eyes and behind her* HE IS NOT UGLY!
ashes: BRING IT ON! *joins in*
kai & kira: idiots..._'
(my one friend actually does think he is ugly...and "ashes" is actually her character. for the record, kai takashi and kira are my OC's...and sorry for the long and pointless review...i'm bored as hell...i can't even post stories here yet T_T)
| Ranchdressing chapter 9 . 3/8/2006
go kai go! i can't wait for you to update! go at ur own pace and screw everyone else! update when the hell YOU want to, not when THEY want you to! . ha ha. i hope you update whenever you can...
| Kira25 chapter 2 . 2/27/2006
Hahaha, and who said chivalry was dead. I'm sure if the circumstances weren't so dire she'd be yelling at him for being sexist... or maybe that's just me. Very funny entertaining chapter, and personally I enjoy explanation chapters because it makes everything click into place so thank you for the explanation. The action here isn't great but nonetheless for this type of chapter it's pretty great he has already formaed a bond with Hillary which I imagine will set things into motion. I just can't wait. Grammar and formatting was as good as always although the description level might have dropped just a tad, but I'm not sure a high description level would have worked here because it seemed to work well. Anyway, the story looks interesting so please continue.
| Kira25 chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
Sorry, I'm such a lazy reviewer. I really like your stories and you deserve more reviews but it just takes so long to write a good review that people like me; well, we simply don't want to review at all. So anyway, back on subject, your stories seem to be quite original and intriguing so if it seems weird to you it usually means it's really original and original stories attract attention... lot's of attention especially if they have certain pairings in them. Once again I liked your formatting and your grammar is good. I'm always so happy when I see these things! Your story is also exciting and gets right to the action; you seem like a very talented writer right about now, and I hope you continue your stories.
| hilarykai3 chapter 9 . 2/24/2006
omg! i think that this fic is awesome! i really hope you update soon cuz this is the best (and i mean seriously) fic i've up the AWESOME work _