Reviews for A Good Offense |
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Ireadtomuch chapter 26 . 8/24/2010 O.O Voldamort wanting captives? I bet it is the Tentei's families! O.O Kurama will feed voldemort to the sinning tree! No one hurts or tries to hurt Kurama's mom and lives! ... that plant is the scariest plant I have seen Kurama use to date o.o and Voldemort totally deserves it! |
Lyn Archer chapter 26 . 8/24/2010 I was recently pointed at The Best Defense and subsequently this story. I enjoyed the story, the characterizations and the plot. Though I am new to the Yu Yu Hakusho fandom, I found this story enjoyable and true to both series. |
half-a-recess chapter 26 . 8/23/2010 I don't know if I've ever reviewed to The Best Defense or to any of the chapters of this story, but I am now! I really like this fic, and I'm glad that it got updated recently! *jump for joy* Thank you thank you! And keep it up! |
Shiakuu Hitome chapter 26 . 8/23/2010 Oh huzzah update! I'm so glad you're continuing this; it's one of my last hold-outs from my anime fandom days, and it was always one of my favorites. I reread the whole book to date (and Best Defense) in preparation of reading the new chapters that have been posted since I last read, and I still love it. It's sometimes silly and definitely interesting and I really enjoy your characterization of various Harry Potter and Yu Yu world people. My one issue that I've noticed in the last few chapters was that some of the action seemed really rushed and not well explained beforehand. I sort of stumbled into what was going on and why in some cases. Though that could be because of lack of sleep. In any case, I love this story and am so glad you're continuing it. Can't wait to read more! Hitome |
Yami no Ningyo chapter 3 . 8/21/2010 First, I love this story (series?). Mixes two of my favorite things together. 3 Second, the term "Cop" is actually British slang. It stands for "Constable on Patrol." I thought that might help you in future. If it does, yay~ If not, well, then you just have a random bit of information that is fairly interesting, no? |
Twilight Dusk chapter 26 . 8/21/2010 I agree with Yusuke. Bwahahahahahahahahahaha! And Neville wins an award. I'm not sure what to call it, but seriously, he found a way to keep Harry from snooping. That's a miracle. A complete miracle. He's really come along, hasn't he though? Didn't any of the Gryffs ask where Neville of all people got firewhiskey? The Hufflepuff idea may have been the best, but the Gryffindor idea sounds like the most fun. Poor Hermione. I cannot wait to see the masquerade. Bwahahahahaha! Also, the party thing reminded me of Oh God Not Again! "I'd like to be in Gryffindor. I hear they have the best parties" "Well, that's okay if you're into that sort of thing." |
Gothic Lust chapter 26 . 8/20/2010 OMG! I love it! please update soon. :) I wonder how the movie is coming along? |
soupcan chapter 26 . 8/19/2010 Lovely, as usual. It's certainly been a while, but it was definitely worth the wait. ...I love the parallels you show between Slytherin and Gryffindor, especially with the reactions to the "regrettably late night"! Fantastic! ...Please update soon? :) |
Lachwen chapter 26 . 8/19/2010 ... oh dear. He went after the Tantei's families, didn't he... Kurama is going to KILL him. With severe and extreme prejudice. Hiei will help. Was wondering if Voldie would think to try that X.x. Good thing he didn't get the hostages though - would have been a VERY short story at that point :P. XD XD XD about the rest - the part with Neville was sweet (yay for getting to learn more about the funness of magic Kurama style) and I had to laugh *hard* at the Griffindors. THANK YOU! Lachie ps: any chance of posting that YYH/Star Trek cross on ? |
TrenchcoatMan chapter 26 . 8/19/2010 OMG its too good to be true, two chapters in 30 some days . this was a most fun chapter, and the thought of Kurama and Neville finding themselves under mistletoe out in the forest... alone had me in fits . Hmm, i wonder which muggles out classed the DEs. Im thinking it must be some of the other YYH crew. Speaking of Fire Whiskey, i wonder what ever would happen if Kurama tapped his demon source for good brews aka Chu, i imagine chaos would ensue. Hope youve been feeling better, i notice you havent been posting much on LJ recently, one worries when one of his favorite authors goes quiet. -TCM |
loki lee chapter 26 . 8/19/2010 You read Tamora Pierce? I used to idolise her. (Now I idolise other people, you being one of them) Wah~ Update, happy. () Chapter leaves me wanting more, can't wait to read your description of the masquerade, Favourite part of chapter was definitely the 'I'm not drunk/hungover', the last section was brilliant. Ah, school principles, always encouraging inter-grade relations... it barely works. But yes, was definitely terrific. What IS Yukina going to make Hiei wear, I do wonder most curiously. Wishing you best of luck with updating! |
HevenSentHellBroken chapter 26 . 8/19/2010 *big watery eyes* Y-Y-You're ALIVE! *happy dance* Today is now a good day! |
deitarionSSokolow chapter 26 . 8/19/2010 Huh. Always interesting to run across someone else who's read Tamora Pierce's work. I don't recognize the reference specifically, but then I've only really gotten around to reading the Song of the Lioness Quartet (or tetralogy, as is the more proper term). I've got parts of Protector of the Small and The Immortals, but I've just been too busy programming to read anything beyond the occasional chapter that arrives in my inbox off FFnet. |
SilverLunaMoon chapter 26 . 8/18/2010 Great chapter I liked it very much :D |
archangel fighter chapter 26 . 8/18/2010 Yay! You reviewed! I really enjoyed this chapter. However, I wonder, what exactly is voldemort's plan that failed-? I don't know. I guess i ll just wait and see :) anyway, good luck with the rest of your updates! And thank you vey much for updating! I really look forward to the next one! |