Reviews for A Good Offense |
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![]() ![]() Once again, I sadly reach the end. The lighthearted scenes in the last two chapters include some really hilarious stuff, great work. Having the scene with Yusuke in this one made me realize that he hasn't been involved much for a while at this point. Off to the synopsis, now. That's another thing: I'm very, very glad you posted a synopsis of the remaining plot and shared it with us, rather than leave it totally incomplete. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story, and I'm sad to see it unfinished. But thanks so much for this, it's a wonderful read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I believe Aniki mean physically older brother possibly oldest brother but older brother definitely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiks hiks... But I can totally empathize with what you feel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it! i am sad that this is abandoned. has someone adopted it? if so please tell me! i am now going to look at your other stories you have written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chu is a demon, says so on the yu yu hakusho wikipedia site. a class s i think also |
![]() ![]() More! Please Or Have Someone Else To Completed It. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story and The Best Defense-your writing is really easy to read, and the plot and character interactions are really interesting. Would love to see this continued/finished if you ever pick it back up again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWW! At least you left a summary, though... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, what will Draco do now? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww ;( |
![]() ![]() Quick question- I've really enjoyed reading this fic, but it seems that your livejournal is no longer active? Would you mind posting the synopsis of the remainder of the plot, maybe as an additional chapter onto this one or A Good Defense? I'm very curious to see how you wanted to end this, even if just in synopsis form. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if you're familiar with Homestuck, but your description of Shin Go really reminds me of moiraillegance. |
![]() ![]() PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE. YOU CAN'T GET TO SUCH AN EXCITING POINT IN THE STORY AND THEN JUST CUT OFF LIKE THAT. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, sad to hear that A Good Offense will probably never be finished. It's been an awesome ride though. Thank you so much for your incredible writing, wonderful characterizations, and all around awesomesauce. |