|Reviews for Infidelity|
| FoolFad chapter 13 . 7/28/2013
Wow. This was just so cute.
It was the perfect combo of comedy, drama and romance all in one go.
Congratulations on writing such a cute story! You truly are talented!
| nacos chapter 11 . 11/15/2010
YES! I'M SO HAPPY THE KIDS NOT SORA'S!
Oh my goodness, this story brings out the inner girl in me, I've teared up many a chapter, and Josh Groban music isn't helping! I even did the whole thing when you put two hands atop your chest and sigh. I haven't reviewed any other chapters, but this one just MADE me have to review!
My heart actually ached on many of these scenes! Your writing really expresses the tension and love between Sora and Kairi. This story is simply captivating; I'm supposed to be doing homework right now, but this is drawing me in!
I have such a visual of this, and everything that happens.
You're doing a wonderful job, I hope to read more of your fanfictions after this one!
| simplyjennxD chapter 13 . 9/15/2008
SO SO CUTE ! :)
I loved it so much.
From time to time, your author note's were like
in the way,
but either than that,
this story was amazing! :)
| Si-Sidera chapter 13 . 6/24/2008
I loved the ending! Great story XD
| frank chapter 13 . 3/30/2008
cool story way better than others ive read so good job
| eCZi chapter 13 . 3/14/2008
This was a kick ass story.
Although, while pondering with my trail of thought, I kinda predicted Riku was with Alexis, BUT LET'S PUT THAT MATTER ASIDE.
Dude. I love the ending...but I hope they don't go afairing behind their backs again...that would MAJORLY suck.
And also...I laughed at the summary...I love it when people make "Simple and Clean" jokes, makes me crack up.
Well, I'm not sure if you would think this is pointless or not, considering that this was finished about a year ago,
but KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
And update soon!
We know you're not updating this one anytime soon... :]
| owl-eyes and wolfsheim inc chapter 5 . 10/31/2007
LOL. I loved this chapter. My favorite part though:
“RING RING RING!” The phone shouted and Kairi let out a loud aggravated yell. Kairi then grabbed the phone and pressed the phone on.
“I TOLD YOU TO FUCK OFF!” Kairi shouted into the phone.
“My My, aren’t you the early bird,” Sora’s voice taunted at her. Kairi blushed and ran a hand through her messy hair.
Haha Kairi told Sora to fuck off. I think I'm gonna laugh at that one forever.
| owl-eyes and wolfsheim inc chapter 13 . 10/31/2007
That was so good! I enjoyed reading it and it twas very hilarious.
| mOOnlite-duskk chapter 13 . 8/27/2007
i SWEAR! this HAs to be FAVED in my list )
its SOIO AWESOMEE!
you are SUCH a talented WRITER D
| mOOnlite-duskk chapter 4 . 8/27/2007
you are SUCH an amazingg WRITER O
a MUIST FAV! )
| X Fallen Star X chapter 13 . 8/7/2007
BRAVO BRAVO ENCORE ENCORE!
it was AMAZING
please continue to write more stories!
you're so talented! XD
| MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 13 . 7/27/2007
Darn, I can't remember if I reached the six review mark... I'm gonna have to go and count them, lol.
| MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 12 . 7/27/2007
I loved that song by the Dixie Chicks. It is an aweomse music video too, lol.
| MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 11 . 7/27/2007
So close to 200. _ Yay, I'm really trying to round the number up.
| MoshiMoshiQueen chapter 10 . 7/27/2007
Hm. Yeah how is she supposed to tell Riku? _